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Get Tangled In Me
Come
Get tangled in me
Be immortal
Within this soul
Just surrender everything
Open up
To a different kind of heaven
It could be exquisite
An extraordinary love
Beautiful passions
Finally born
A unique knowing
Of a new belonging
To never be separated
Joined by a heart
That can never die
Feel the touch of me
Shaking the foundations
Of your senses
Desire is not enough
Need all
Every breath
Heartbeat of love
I dare you to be here
Were I will
Sweetly destroy you
piece by piece
Then resurrect you
Kiss by kiss
Get tangled in me
Be immortal
Within this soul
Just surrender everything
Open up
To a different kind of heaven
It could be exquisite
An extraordinary love
Beautiful passions
Finally born
A unique knowing
Of a new belonging
To never be separated
Joined by a heart
That can never die
Feel the touch of me
Shaking the foundations
Of your senses
Desire is not enough
Need all
Every breath
Heartbeat of love
I dare you to be here
Were I will
Sweetly destroy you
piece by piece
Then resurrect you
Kiss by kiss
Published 26th Dec 2019
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26th Dec 2019 4:24pm
26th Dec 2019 4:56pm
26th Dec 2019 6:24pm
“Sweetly destroy you
piece by piece
Then resurrect you
Kiss by kiss...”
Mmm. This, is absolutely exquisite... especially the aforementioned stanza !
piece by piece
Then resurrect you
Kiss by kiss...”
Mmm. This, is absolutely exquisite... especially the aforementioned stanza !
26th Dec 2019 6:31pm
26th Dec 2019 6:32pm
There is a kind of pure appeal in this passionate epistle. Sensitivity, clarity, throughout. Nice work.
I would love it if you would send us an audio of this poem to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. It would grant fuller dimension to the piece and draw attention to your writing on site, help forge friendships. If you would be interested, please include the title of the work and your screen name and send to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
I hope you'll consider it. Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast.
In kindness,
Daniel
I would love it if you would send us an audio of this poem to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. It would grant fuller dimension to the piece and draw attention to your writing on site, help forge friendships. If you would be interested, please include the title of the work and your screen name and send to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
I hope you'll consider it. Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast.
In kindness,
Daniel
26th Dec 2019 6:37pm
My voice would certainly spoil any appeal this piece might have to the reader
26th Dec 2019 6:43pm
Haha well nobody is perfect brother. My last audio poem is fraught with clicks, mispronunciations, and there is even a glitch in the middle when it uploaded, but eh, expression is the point of it, not perfection. I hope you'll think about it. :)
26th Dec 2019 6:56pm
If someone wanted to make an audio of it, to enter it into the podcast, I would give permission. Just not that confident enough to record myself
27th Dec 2019 5:33pm
Okay thank you. I'll pass it along. Maybe Josh or Magdalena or myself. Keep an ear out and we really appreciate the participation!
27th Dec 2019 10:54pm
Brother,
You should hire Magdalena to read aloud all Your Romantic spills
and form it into a audio book and You and Her would magnetize all the romantics on a global scale!!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/392313-the-poetcast-project---episode-20/
You should hire Magdalena to read aloud all Your Romantic spills
and form it into a audio book and You and Her would magnetize all the romantics on a global scale!!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/392313-the-poetcast-project---episode-20/
Anonymous
2nd Feb 2022 3:20pm
I agree so much with the comments that were previously written, Colin...
Such beautiful emotional impact and that last stanza really takes your breath away. Daniel was so right, that audio from Magdalena was absolutely gorgeous!
Your words are magic, my friend 🙏🏻
I love love love this
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Such beautiful emotional impact and that last stanza really takes your breath away. Daniel was so right, that audio from Magdalena was absolutely gorgeous!
Your words are magic, my friend 🙏🏻
I love love love this
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
