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Cristes-messe
the wind is as still as
a small child sleeping,
but if you listen carefully
you can hear the whispers
of prayers in the air.
churches with be filled
tonight,
candles lit in choirs of
light.
peace will be asked
for,
hoped for.
peace,
what a strange and
curious beast.
peace,
a beautiful white horse
running wild through
the frost and shadows
of moonbeams
that men can
never fully
capture.
Published 25th Dec 2019
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25th Dec 2019 5:14am
Dear BK,
How true! Such a seemingly simple concept and yet so ellusive. Peace.
A lovely visual all the way through. I felt transported back to my church going days and the quiet of the nave before mass. I love the metaphor of the wild horse. Beautiful BK! Xo H 🌷
How true! Such a seemingly simple concept and yet so ellusive. Peace.
A lovely visual all the way through. I felt transported back to my church going days and the quiet of the nave before mass. I love the metaphor of the wild horse. Beautiful BK! Xo H 🌷
25th Dec 2019 6:22am
25th Dec 2019 5:36am
ah..never seen peace taking such wilderness of a beast...this is would say mingboggling truth to the core..
the wild , the raw, the uncompromising, the absolute, the truth....of course tends to have this beauty & divinity & so seemingly the elusivity...that one has such hardcore faith ..& feels in an unwavering atman soulsprited form ..yet not seems to feel drinking in to the illusions..the maya.. .all driving 'one' point from all around~in ...towards with~within .. 'the love' in all its fierceness of flaming suns. beautiful take bk..finely drawn out message that only drains more towards peace light & love that soul realizes, yet not the egoistical maya of mindedskins... juz me excuse my excessive wordistics;) ..loved this dear adored bk... peace of an xmas & 2020:)
the wild , the raw, the uncompromising, the absolute, the truth....of course tends to have this beauty & divinity & so seemingly the elusivity...that one has such hardcore faith ..& feels in an unwavering atman soulsprited form ..yet not seems to feel drinking in to the illusions..the maya.. .all driving 'one' point from all around~in ...towards with~within .. 'the love' in all its fierceness of flaming suns. beautiful take bk..finely drawn out message that only drains more towards peace light & love that soul realizes, yet not the egoistical maya of mindedskins... juz me excuse my excessive wordistics;) ..loved this dear adored bk... peace of an xmas & 2020:)
25th Dec 2019 6:24am
25th Dec 2019 11:24am
"that man can never
completely capture."
True, not on a mass level, but individually is another story.
Well done, BK.
completely capture."
True, not on a mass level, but individually is another story.
Well done, BK.
25th Dec 2019 12:32pm
Agreed Mr Blaze , but it sure would be nice if the world got it right.
Merry Christmas to you.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Merry Christmas to you.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
25th Dec 2019 1:00pm
Much like the true Spirit of anything.
Lovely offering, Kitts.
Happy Christmas to you and yours! xo
Lovely offering, Kitts.
Happy Christmas to you and yours! xo
25th Dec 2019 1:14pm
Many thanks Ahvanti.
Have a beautiful day with those you love.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Have a beautiful day with those you love.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
25th Dec 2019 2:02pm
25th Dec 2019 4:03pm
Well-spoken, kittyB...
mayhap we
have not enough patience to pause... and allow
the blessing of Peace to come in...
we are
after all...an impatient lot... hugs, and "World Peace"...Ely
mayhap we
have not enough patience to pause... and allow
the blessing of Peace to come in...
we are
after all...an impatient lot... hugs, and "World Peace"...Ely
25th Dec 2019 8:54pm
26th Dec 2019 4:17am
Peace like freedom is only for few...the herd...the tribes...
A beautiful poem Kitty...should be read by all our leaders.
Peace...Harry
A beautiful poem Kitty...should be read by all our leaders.
Peace...Harry
26th Dec 2019 5:00am
Thank you Harry. Peace and blessing to you and yours.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty.
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