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Longing’s Door
Heartbeat whispers
Knock knock
Longing only comes
when you depart
Reveling in its’ pungent pull
I beg you to leave me yet again
Knock knock
I dare not answer
lest our together render
longing inutile.
R.
Knock knock
Longing only comes
when you depart
Reveling in its’ pungent pull
I beg you to leave me yet again
Knock knock
I dare not answer
lest our together render
longing inutile.
R.
Published 24th Dec 2019
| Edited 9th Jan 2022
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24th Dec 2019 11:04pm
28th Dec 2019 5:40am
Thank you, NB. I liked the layers of meaning that helps create as well :). R.
28th Dec 2019 2:35pm
24th Dec 2019 11:21pm
Separation extinguishes small and enflames large loves.
That is what I read from this inbetween the lines, Rachel.
That is what I read from this inbetween the lines, Rachel.
28th Dec 2019 5:43am
I think that is right on, Ahavati. And even maybe that limiters like words might create separation in the biggest of these loves. 🙏🏽, R.
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27th Dec 2019 9:25pm
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Merci, Didier! Et...je te dois la suite! Je ne l’ai pas oubliée, juste bcp de choses en ce moment avec les fêtes et ... :). R.
