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You're running that of course. It's an odd bit that wasn't as long and heading in a somewhat different direction. I should be more patient in my future "corrective" actions. Thanks for pointing out my laziness. Slackers never win.  :-/

Dear AJ,

Beautiful write. For me, this lends itself to a soothing truth of unfettered love as it should be.

As the piece stands on its own I did wonder if it might read just as well by removing the second “close” directly below the title?  

Either way it’s a lovely write. H🌷

You , my friend, are always to kind. And that idea crossed my mind too. Perhaps next time I should pay more attention to good ideas than lazy ones.

a feeling that rings true for many hearts and souls loved the flow of your words i agree with sunsettown the flow should continue on with your words as they free flow...nicely composed my friend

Thank you Stoney. I guess I'll stick to being myself from now on.

its good sometimes to step out from the norm i do it sometimes on some of my pieces for when you find what works with your writing thats a good thing i find when i submit a piece i am not to sure which direction i want it to go i look for honest judgement of my work so i submit it as is that is how you grow and learn your true style of writing what fits you better as a writer of spoken words...respect my friend

Those loves are dangerous, slow burners. Beautiful and muted.
Thank you. P

Love dancing in the flames

As someone who has been burnt badly , mostly self afflicted, I don't but can appreciate those who do. X

I've found two songs of the years that tell my story well

Gary Allan - Get Off On The Pain @ https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=BAcstCYcZzQ

Chris Knight - It Ain't Easy Being Me @ https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=2wvMNu15Uwo

Just another fool, your average Joe ~ x

A favourite for me when rolling heartache around in my mouth is this. I do heartbreak well.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=aoh1uDhxZCM

So, do we find what we seek or do really know what we seek to find? I live in a world of changlings, who once you think you know, are never quite what they seem. Or perhaps it's just me.

That's quite the compliment, thank you! All I can say is, its the only way I know how to write, everything else seems to crash and burn on take-off. Thank you again for reading and sharing.