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War inside the head
Bound by the winds of history
Enslaved for the repeated mistakes
Tortured by the person you lay next to
Surrounded by the wings of change
Beaten & battered to numb your pain
(Free your mind from the mental cell
you in!!!)
Enslaved for the repeated mistakes
Tortured by the person you lay next to
Surrounded by the wings of change
Beaten & battered to numb your pain
(Free your mind from the mental cell
you in!!!)
Published 19th Dec 2019
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22nd Dec 2019 7:21am
Very profound. I like how you changed the wind/wings positions in this piece and closing the poem with a freeing statement.
Well done.
Well done.
23rd Dec 2019 9:17am
Thank you,
I wish to help someone who may be feeling this way because of a physical presence.
I wish to help someone who may be feeling this way because of a physical presence.
23rd Dec 2019 9:25am
Nice and inspirational poetry... A great and powerful message you send. Great writing, quizzy
23rd Dec 2019 9:31am
Thanks,
Love can sometimes leave a person mentally stuck on yesterday cause it’s better than dealing with reality.
Love can sometimes leave a person mentally stuck on yesterday cause it’s better than dealing with reality.
23rd Dec 2019 9:32am
That is certainly true... There are many people living in the past. My pleasure
23rd Dec 2019 9:37am
Exactly..
that’s one reason we weren’t designed to look back for too long. Gotta look forward
Again, Thank you
that’s one reason we weren’t designed to look back for too long. Gotta look forward
Again, Thank you
20th Jun 2021 11:58pm
