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[ SN ] Crab School Blues
What's it be
taking for Poseidon's
breaking me apart?
Ice chunk concussions?
Slammings into'ver railings
en'during wind-driven wave'rings?
More likely separation
anxiety at sea ...
without me Sweetheart
Published 18th Dec 2019
| Edited 27th Oct 2021
Author's Note
for the comp "Christmas Tricube Thriller" @
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11160/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11160/
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18th Dec 2019 1:51pm
o O Great entry! Nothing worse than sailing without your sailing buddy! Hopefully I'll git me sea-legs back soon when not so busy on dry land! xo
Best of luck in the comp!
Best of luck in the comp!
18th Dec 2019 2:03pm
LOL I'd carry you on my shoulders or wheel you around in a crab cart!
Thank you! xo
Thank you! xo
18th Dec 2019 2:08pm
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18th Dec 2019 1:55pm
No sweetheart can make one feel crabby alright. Fun write Mr Blaze.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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19th Dec 2019 6:19am
Dear JB,
This was good! As I’m staying ashore I look forward to being regaled by your sea travels ;-)
Good luck in the comp.. H
This was good! As I’m staying ashore I look forward to being regaled by your sea travels ;-)
Good luck in the comp.. H
19th Dec 2019 12:16pm
19th Dec 2019 7:42am
I love a well executed nautical theme, and this was on point. Lovely piece xox
19th Dec 2019 12:18pm
Thank you, CeeCee. And Welcome to DUP - hope your time here is poetically productive and enjoyable.
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