Beloved Rain

I love this entry, Amora.  I particularly love the use of the word lave.

There are a couple of things you might want to correct:

Why is your fallin' drops not able                  
to lave the dust inside my head?    

In regards to grammar, 'is' should be 'are', as the subject is plural, i.e. - drops.  

When abbreviating a word, you might as well write out the word if the last letter is going to be an apostrophe; fall'n would be correct.    

If you saved the template of the graphic, you can pull it up and make these minor corrections before the comp ends. Once the comp ends, it's locked until a winner is chosen.  Also, if you select "Yes" to the prompt "Visual Poem" under the image before you submit it, the image will be much larger and you won't have to type your poem.

Best of luck in the comp! I LOVE to see new blood. . .erm, entrants win!  

Thanks a lot Ma'm for your concern. I really need someone to find out the mistakes in my poems. I always do such glaring mistakes in my work. I hope you'll understand. It's not my native language:-)

I do, and you're very welcome! Best of luck in the comp!  This is a great entry!

Thanks a ton Ma'm. Lucky to have a reader like you.🖤