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Effortless
Love should be
effortless & unforced
Easy to forgive
and hard to anger
Love is holding hands
while slowly walking in the rain
A smile across the room
A laugh when you play
It is visible to everyone
that shares the same space
Love is heard in the silence
and felt when away
It is never going to bed angry
and sleeping with the enemy
And when the fight is over,
It should really be over,
Not saved for another day.
effortless & unforced
Easy to forgive
and hard to anger
Love is holding hands
while slowly walking in the rain
A smile across the room
A laugh when you play
It is visible to everyone
that shares the same space
Love is heard in the silence
and felt when away
It is never going to bed angry
and sleeping with the enemy
And when the fight is over,
It should really be over,
Not saved for another day.
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Re. Effortless
14th Dec 2019 1:28am
Beautiful.
Fav line, 'Love is heard in the silence and felt when away.'
So...have you ever felt that way then Pencil? ;-)
Fav line, 'Love is heard in the silence and felt when away.'
So...have you ever felt that way then Pencil? ;-)
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Re: Re. Effortless
14th Dec 2019 1:37am
Re: Re. Effortless
14th Dec 2019 1:51am
Hmmm, now there's a question. I would have put what I felt another way but...maybe, yeah. ;-)
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Re. Effortless
14th Dec 2019 6:33am
Perfectly put👌
Though in love probably no fights, more disagreements or differences of opinions,
And rightly so, should never ever still be on ones mind, when kissing goodnight
Only my opinion here.
Though in love probably no fights, more disagreements or differences of opinions,
And rightly so, should never ever still be on ones mind, when kissing goodnight
Only my opinion here.
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Re: Re. Effortless
15th Dec 2019 1:34am
In my opinion, you're absolutely correct!
And, difference in opinion probably describes it the best way! 😁
Having the same basic moral values is the most important factor, I think. After that, difference in opinion provides a great platform for growth!
Afterall, how boring would the world be if we all shared the same opinion?
And, difference in opinion probably describes it the best way! 😁
Having the same basic moral values is the most important factor, I think. After that, difference in opinion provides a great platform for growth!
Afterall, how boring would the world be if we all shared the same opinion?
Re: Re. Effortless
15th Dec 2019 6:29am
Differences of opinions create discussion, therefore,
Its healthy in a relationship to be with opinions that sometimes differ
With the strongest of bonds, one still has their own beliefs, still keeps their character👌👍
Its healthy in a relationship to be with opinions that sometimes differ
With the strongest of bonds, one still has their own beliefs, still keeps their character👌👍
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Re: Re. Effortless
15th Dec 2019 8:23am
Omgosh! You're ABSOLUTELY RIGHT!!
Wow, that is a perfect testament to love, being able to love without losing yourself in the process! ❤
Wow, that is a perfect testament to love, being able to love without losing yourself in the process! ❤
Re: Re. Effortless
15th Dec 2019 8:25am
Re: Re. Effortless
15th Dec 2019 8:42am
I have wise days and dumb days like most everyone else, but thankyou kindly all the same 👍👌🤗
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Re. Effortless
14th Dec 2019 9:49pm
Re: Re. Effortless
15th Dec 2019 1:41am
Thank you, NewBeginnings 🌹
And thank you for saving my poetry to your RL, I'm flattered. 😊
And thank you for saving my poetry to your RL, I'm flattered. 😊
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Re: Re. Effortless
17th Dec 2019 00:34am
Thank you. 😊
I'm sure I have my days, like most of us, I'm sure.
I'm honored to make your RL! I really enjoy your poetry as well!
I'm sure I have my days, like most of us, I'm sure.
I'm honored to make your RL! I really enjoy your poetry as well!
Re. Effortless
17th Dec 2019 1:46am
Your beautiful poem is a recipe that all should learn and memorize Scribbles.
Peace...and love...Harry
Peace...and love...Harry
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Re: Re. Effortless
17th Dec 2019 2:12am
Thank you so much, Harry.
For your wonderful, uplifting replies and for adding my work to your reading list. ❤
For your wonderful, uplifting replies and for adding my work to your reading list. ❤
Re. Effortless
18th Dec 2019 6:01am
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19th Dec 2019 5:55pm
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18th Dec 2019 9:15pm
Re. Effortless
Exactly just what my beliefs are !
Geez. Thank you for going through the labor to take time and write.
It’s like I’ve learned a few thing about myself by reading this when I couldn’t even put the words together myself!
<3
H
Geez. Thank you for going through the labor to take time and write.
It’s like I’ve learned a few thing about myself by reading this when I couldn’t even put the words together myself!
<3
H
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19th Dec 2019 5:57pm
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19th Dec 2019 4:24pm
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19th Dec 2019 5:58pm
Re. Effortless
7th Apr 2020 4:39am
Dear P,
I totall concur love should be this easy. I also, on the very same hand, can’t figure out why it isn’t. It’s a renewed commitment each day that sometimes feels easier than some and harder than others. Alas, what I do know to be true is you’ve written a beautiful piece on the the essence of love and I will come back to this often to be reminded of it. H🌷
I totall concur love should be this easy. I also, on the very same hand, can’t figure out why it isn’t. It’s a renewed commitment each day that sometimes feels easier than some and harder than others. Alas, what I do know to be true is you’ve written a beautiful piece on the the essence of love and I will come back to this often to be reminded of it. H🌷
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