What Did You Expect, A Happy Ending?

beautiful picture lovely Nikki
it kind of looks like the open barrel of a gun close up
aw well with the same results...

love Brenda ❤

Thank you Brenda you're awesome!

Ahahaha! Your titles are as clever as your poetry and photographs! I want to honor your request for honest critique and suggest the following edits:

The drain
called her name
she [ started it ] circle[ed] it <- to? I would suggest simply she circled
[ going ] round and round, <- I'd lose going- it's implied
[ a space would provide some emphasis on the ending ]
someone turned
the water on⁠—
she fuckin drowned

If these suggestions are heeded, it would read like this?

The drain
called her name
she circled—
round and round

someone turned
the water on⁠—
she fuckin drowned

Hope that helps somewhat. I didn't change anything except the tense on circle.  Elsewise I trimmed what I felt to be extraneous, thus driving your point more succinctly!

Im using my phone so my editing is limited but i fixed the to and going. The smallest shit filled with so many mistakes 😂😂 then photos take longer for me to eye then my poetry takes to write. 😂😂

Hey! I said I'd help! 😂😂

I appreciate it. I can learn from you. my writing skills are ehhh but I have 9 trillion ideas that i want to come to life.

Love it ... Same with pics ...  a min for the words 6 hrs for the right or close enough pic ... Lol ... Words percolate ... Pics need to be hunted down ... Bless and love ...

Thank you 😉

A powerful theme and a never ending story summed up in such few words.  
Well done.

Sheer Terror

Thank you!! I appreciate you!!

Well said.

Thank you!