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Arrhythmia
When I saw you there...
As if a broken record
My heart skipped a beat
As if a broken record
My heart skipped a beat
Author's Note
Inspired by that 'butterflies in your chest' feeling that you get when you're around that special someone :)
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Re. Arrhythmia
4th Dec 2019 4:15pm
And just like the melodic beats in a song, this proffers the same kind of clarity !
Lovely ! Short but sweet in all it’s simplicity... 🔥🔥🔥
Lovely ! Short but sweet in all it’s simplicity... 🔥🔥🔥
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4th Dec 2019 4:32pm
Mmmhmmm :). I almost named this one 'Butterflies' actually, heh. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, Serenity!
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4th Dec 2019 4:45pm
Great imagery, it’s been many years since I have owned a record player, but that line immediately triggered a memory of the sound. And, yes, that is what it is like when I see someone I love.
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4th Dec 2019 5:24pm
I'm glad that you are able to relate, Kink. Your comment and compliments are much appreciated :)
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5th Dec 2019 1:05am
Awwww, thanks sky!
I have missed this community and the inspiration I derive from it. Tonight when I get off work I'll slide on over to your page and see what you've been up to :)
I have missed this community and the inspiration I derive from it. Tonight when I get off work I'll slide on over to your page and see what you've been up to :)
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8th Dec 2019 11:58am
I am glad to have shared the 'feeling' with you, Kexby. Thank you, and take care :)
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Anonymous
11th Dec 2019 4:45am
Ahhhhhh, sounds like new love, that feeling is the best!
Beautiful little poem! 🤗
Beautiful little poem! 🤗
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30th Dec 2019 3:48pm
I'm glad that you enjoyed this, Ely! Thank you for your continued support :)