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Disappearing Layers
My shell has cracked
My cover blown
Layers been stripped
My lips
Want to breath
Your sweet air
Just touch me
Give me
A piece of your heaven
Mind is open
With dreams of you
That make me blush
Baring myself
To a primal feeling
That is beautiful
I gift
My heart my very soul
In submission
A book
That’s waiting
For you to read
My cover blown
Layers been stripped
My lips
Want to breath
Your sweet air
Just touch me
Give me
A piece of your heaven
Mind is open
With dreams of you
That make me blush
Baring myself
To a primal feeling
That is beautiful
I gift
My heart my very soul
In submission
A book
That’s waiting
For you to read
Published 3rd Dec 2019
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3rd Dec 2019 1:55pm
A reading list for a book worthy of reading
Enjoyable lovely yearning piece 👍
Enjoyable lovely yearning piece 👍
3rd Dec 2019 4:23pm
This one has a wintery feel. Seasonally appropriate. I like the book metaphor.
3rd Dec 2019 7:09pm
Cuddle up before the fireplace
embers warming
reading the Tome of You
a wonderful feel to this romantic spill, Brother
embers warming
reading the Tome of You
a wonderful feel to this romantic spill, Brother
Anonymous
11th Nov 2021 2:19am
Such a potently pleasurable read.... I too, love the book metaphor. It makes me feel warm and familiar.... snuggly ..... Such a beautiful poem. I was smitten with it, C
I thank you for bumping it!
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B
I thank you for bumping it!
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B
