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Little Death
Will you be my le petite morte,
I want to die a little today,
Will you be my little death,
Let your lips trail down my body,
Take my breath away,
Help me die a little,
Tie me down so I don't struggle,
Cut away my flesh,
Carve me into your perfect doll,
Make me beg for more,
Please be my le petite morte,
When I'm perfect take me,
Let me fullfill your fantasy's
I want to die a little today,
Will you be my little death,
Let your lips trail down my body,
Take my breath away,
Help me die a little,
Tie me down so I don't struggle,
Cut away my flesh,
Carve me into your perfect doll,
Make me beg for more,
Please be my le petite morte,
When I'm perfect take me,
Let me fullfill your fantasy's
Published 28th Dec 2011
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28th Dec 2011 6:09pm
2nd Jan 2012 4:53am
Wow. This is...I don't even know what to say. My jaw dropped as I kept reading. I can't decide if this is beautiful or tragic...let's say both...WOW. I don't know if you meant it to be tragic, but I can feel that, a little. Incredible.
P.S. 'fantasy's' at the end is spelled 'fantasies'. Helpful hint:)
P.S. 'fantasy's' at the end is spelled 'fantasies'. Helpful hint:)
6th Jan 2012 11:56pm
A little note le petite morte is suppossed to mean orgasim, but litterally means the little death. Isn't french fun
Yes it is!
You really had me hooked until the carving flesh part. Agh! Good feeling evoked here in all the senses. Just a couple notes: the last word should be spelled 'fantasies' and it would read better if you added question marks. That's all. I loved the way you built it from the beginning, even if flesh carving isn't my thing. :)
You really had me hooked until the carving flesh part. Agh! Good feeling evoked here in all the senses. Just a couple notes: the last word should be spelled 'fantasies' and it would read better if you added question marks. That's all. I loved the way you built it from the beginning, even if flesh carving isn't my thing. :)
9th Jan 2013 5:58pm
Random poem button sent me to this little number xD
Loved thhe feel and flow of this
Nice post
Loved thhe feel and flow of this
Nice post
