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When Alone

the sun keeps shining
through the night
the stars keep twinkling
when it's light

sadness comes
with ecstasy
I feel you when
you feel me

fingers touching
minds aroused
contemplating
in a crowd

of thoughts that tumble
swept along
believing we're where
we belong

in the darkness
when alone
on our laptops
on the phone

in electric
harmony
I feel you when
you feel me
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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