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[ fAwL ] Take A Picture
they always say---
It will last longer
And so I did
---such to be a trophy
I will dearly treasure
because I am PROUD of what
I accomplished; a goal
far more rewarding than any
accolades from having
outdone the next person
by an increment of measure
is aspiring to be
closer to one you Love
It will last longer
And so I did
---such to be a trophy
I will dearly treasure
because I am PROUD of what
I accomplished; a goal
far more rewarding than any
accolades from having
outdone the next person
by an increment of measure
is aspiring to be
closer to one you Love
Published 30th Nov 2019
| Edited 2nd Nov 2021
Author's Note
for Ahavati with Love 💙💑💋
Thank you for always being encouraging, supportive and believing in me.
Thank you for always being encouraging, supportive and believing in me.
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30th Nov 2019 4:50pm
Take a picture it'll last longer....some shouldn't practice witchcraft in an attempt to throw an evil eye and not expect a natural response.....
Still didn't recognize at the time. Obviously u took it personal
Still didn't recognize at the time. Obviously u took it personal
30th Nov 2019 6:16pm
30th Nov 2019 10:19pm
30th Nov 2019 6:17pm
Awww! This is lovely! And true! It will last here as long as the site does! Competitive behaviour behooves no one positively. Always choose Love. Thank you. 💙💑💋
1st Dec 2019 12:21pm
Dear JB,
Once again, I am awed by your inspirational devotion. The both of you are forces of good and I truly appreciate how you share that goodness! Very kind write!
H🌷
Once again, I am awed by your inspirational devotion. The both of you are forces of good and I truly appreciate how you share that goodness! Very kind write!
H🌷
1st Dec 2019 12:24pm
Thank you, Honoria. Life is grand when people bring out the best in each other.
1st Dec 2019 11:37pm
Simplicity walking, distilled into affection confections. I like your style Johnny, old school from centuries back
2nd Dec 2019 1:21am
2nd Dec 2019 9:16pm
Wow, I have to admire the inspiration (and connection). There is so much in to feel in the brevity of words and you tend to capture that naturally.
2nd Dec 2019 9:22pm
Thank you, Wally. These wonderful comments of yours will further inspire me.
5th Dec 2019 1:43am
5th Dec 2019 1:52am
18th Dec 2019 3:04pm
This is sweet and playfully competitive.
" they always say - It will last longer / And so I did; " It's like, don't challenge me, I'll knock this out and look damn good doing it.
I like that the sweetness is not immediate nor saccharine. It makes it easier to savor and allows it to linger in the mind longer.
Thank you for sharing this.
" they always say - It will last longer / And so I did; " It's like, don't challenge me, I'll knock this out and look damn good doing it.
I like that the sweetness is not immediate nor saccharine. It makes it easier to savor and allows it to linger in the mind longer.
Thank you for sharing this.
18th Dec 2019 4:37pm
Thank you, IES. Yes, too sweet like anything usually comes off as saccharine, fake and purposely in-your-face.
7th Jun 2020 4:25am
Whether with love or rivalry the picture says it all
When all has been said and done
Hopefully there will be enough evidence left to take as exhibits
Anything more than that can only be left to be viewed at the scene by ordinary bystanders wandering along the way
When all has been said and done
Hopefully there will be enough evidence left to take as exhibits
Anything more than that can only be left to be viewed at the scene by ordinary bystanders wandering along the way
