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[ Thanksgiving 2019 ] This Great Full Life
Though not everlasting
an enduring peace I envision
lasting just long enough on a homestead
living out the remainder of our days; ease
in being flowerwild and bushberry selves---
becoming second nature when roaming fields
emptied of so much threshed wheat
Author's Note
for Ahavati with Love 💙💑💋
Happy Thanksgiving, Darling ❤📝
Happy Thanksgiving, Darling ❤📝
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Re. This Great Full Life
28th Nov 2019 1:55pm
living out the remainder of our days; ease
in being flowerwild and bushberry selves
is rather lovely! Perhaps because of "flower wild" and "selves" bringing to mind "elves", with the fleelting, romantic image of "bushberry elves"
SeaCat
in being flowerwild and bushberry selves
is rather lovely! Perhaps because of "flower wild" and "selves" bringing to mind "elves", with the fleelting, romantic image of "bushberry elves"
SeaCat
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Re: Re. This Great Full Life
28th Nov 2019 3:13pm
Thank you, SeaCat. I am always grateful to hear your feedback. I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving!
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30th Nov 2019 11:03pm
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30th Nov 2019 11:06pm
I omitted to wish you a happy thanksgiving. Hope that it was good for you.
Thank you. I’m not in USA - but thank you nonetheless :)
Thank you. I’m not in USA - but thank you nonetheless :)
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Re: Re. This Great Full Life
30th Nov 2019 11:09pm
Thank you, SeaCat. I'm happy that it is over LOL! The holidays are exhausting.
Re. This Great Full Life
28th Nov 2019 3:11pm
Mmmm, envisioning the scents of bushberry plants (Blues & Boysens)
Warm carefree cuddling spill
very romantic seasoned with sensuality
Warm carefree cuddling spill
very romantic seasoned with sensuality
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Re: Re. This Great Full Life
28th Nov 2019 3:14pm
Thank you, Tallen! I hope your Thanksgiving is a memorable feast of both the tummy and spirit!
Re. This Great Full Life
28th Nov 2019 4:06pm
I LOVE this one! Thank you so much, Sweetheart!
That final line is perfect! 💙💑💋
Happy ThanksDreaming! ❤📝
That final line is perfect! 💙💑💋
Happy ThanksDreaming! ❤📝
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Re: Re. This Great Full Life
28th Nov 2019 4:09pm
You were very instrumental in inspiring this, as you usually are. I LOVE that you LOVE it! 💙💑💋
Re. This Great Full Life
28th Nov 2019 11:22pm
This is delightful...if only I could have half of this I would be bushberry happy
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28th Nov 2019 11:26pm
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28th Nov 2019 11:28pm
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Re. This Great Full Life
2nd Dec 2019 7:15pm
You two have this great writing chemistry. I always enjoy those pieces that are both natural and spiritual.
Excellent write Johnny.
Excellent write Johnny.
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Re: Re. This Great Full Life
2nd Dec 2019 9:11pm
Thank you, Wally. It comes naturally with someone you feel a spiritual connection with.