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Dependency (what do you fear the most challenge)
Moonlit eyes, vernal touch
and a golden embrace.
I slowly grow dependent
upon the things I
can never have.
and a golden embrace.
I slowly grow dependent
upon the things I
can never have.
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Oh.
27th Dec 2011 11:23pm
I love this do much. We all spend our time wishing for things or...someone we can't have.
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:)
28th Dec 2011 9:16am
O
You are the one
who wrecks havoc
with tiny bombs.
Like this one.
Minimilism has a new
n a me.
Curtsy,
S'
You are the one
who wrecks havoc
with tiny bombs.
Like this one.
Minimilism has a new
n a me.
Curtsy,
S'
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24 Karat Gold...
28th Dec 2011 9:47am
Your gem like words have no limits in their heights of excellence just like gold prices touching sky-high these days.
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re: 24 Karat Gold...
28th Dec 2011 10:55am
I can't thank all of you enough.
thanks for reading and dropping your gems of a comments.
thanks for reading and dropping your gems of a comments.
re: re: 24 Karat Gold...
28th Dec 2011 6:18pm
Beautiful poetic images. With a melancholy end.
I think it's stupid to ask why you can not have what you wish. I hope that something you can get it.
Are you sealed and deep as our Italian poets of the century. I wonder if there is was a kind of hermetic poetry in Greece too.
It may well be in the cradle of Classical Culture ...
I think it's stupid to ask why you can not have what you wish. I hope that something you can get it.
Are you sealed and deep as our Italian poets of the century. I wonder if there is was a kind of hermetic poetry in Greece too.
It may well be in the cradle of Classical Culture ...
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re: re: re: 24 Karat Gold...
29th Dec 2011 5:44pm
unfortunately there's not any similar kind in Greek literature. not that i know of anyway.
Always an honour to hear from you, dear.
Always an honour to hear from you, dear.
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2011 9:04pm
"Vernal touch" and "golden embrace" work perfectly together. A rich melancholia.
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=)
7th Jan 2012 9:17pm
Whoa
25th Jan 2012 10:13pm
"I slowly grow dependent
upon the things I
can never have."
Wow. That is such a great line.
upon the things I
can never have."
Wow. That is such a great line.
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