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A Blue night
with the hide and seek
of dark and light
Touch-me-nots underneath
and above the starry labyrinth
up in her embrace
I melt and spread and fuse
and fall from infinite grace
after the endless wait
for ageless submission
Sleepless, starlit hours
so beyond all of my powers
finally comes to an end
my lips are burnt
by her cruel kiss
my breath is trapped
i n s i d e
a radiant rabbit
dashing zigzag
jewels on display
overhead
with a slight mist ahead
and a continuous vista
of magical white
a s o f t b l u r
The closed eyes
the fluid sight
uninhibited tear drops
of unadulterated joy
that gush and rush and freeze
Skins get caressed
by the soft enchanting breeze
as they brush and catch fire
which originates within
deep inside the soul
The heart of darkness
lit by the light of hope
Static bodies coiled
by the silver rope
The world has ceased
to exist
as we have ceased
to resist
Giant swirling tides
of longing
crashing onto the high walls
of optimism,
sand
fingers clutch
hair stands
the moment stays
and lives-
a prolonged astral dream
our frail, virgin minds
transcend the depths
of this land of white snow-
beneath our feet-
a g l o w
The portals open from inside
our hearts and amalgamate
into one perfect tangible follicle
A million intangible blasting dreams-
tiny glowworms
overlapping
in perfect asymmetry
in the cavity
transmitted from inside
our beings-in unison
A swirling pulsar rotating
in multi dimensional axles
The shrieks from childhood
and the silence-fragments
of two lives
begin to
coalesce
coexist
we become one
and the world
and I see
the mist ripples
round your thin white neck
with dazzling crimson rings-
The signature of my love
my love
with the hide and seek
of dark and light
Touch-me-nots underneath
and above the starry labyrinth
up in her embrace
I melt and spread and fuse
and fall from infinite grace
after the endless wait
for ageless submission
Sleepless, starlit hours
so beyond all of my powers
finally comes to an end
my lips are burnt
by her cruel kiss
my breath is trapped
i n s i d e
a radiant rabbit
dashing zigzag
jewels on display
overhead
with a slight mist ahead
and a continuous vista
of magical white
a s o f t b l u r
The closed eyes
the fluid sight
uninhibited tear drops
of unadulterated joy
that gush and rush and freeze
Skins get caressed
by the soft enchanting breeze
as they brush and catch fire
which originates within
deep inside the soul
The heart of darkness
lit by the light of hope
Static bodies coiled
by the silver rope
The world has ceased
to exist
as we have ceased
to resist
Giant swirling tides
of longing
crashing onto the high walls
of optimism,
sand
fingers clutch
hair stands
the moment stays
and lives-
a prolonged astral dream
our frail, virgin minds
transcend the depths
of this land of white snow-
beneath our feet-
a g l o w
The portals open from inside
our hearts and amalgamate
into one perfect tangible follicle
A million intangible blasting dreams-
tiny glowworms
overlapping
in perfect asymmetry
in the cavity
transmitted from inside
our beings-in unison
A swirling pulsar rotating
in multi dimensional axles
The shrieks from childhood
and the silence-fragments
of two lives
begin to
coalesce
coexist
we become one
and the world
and I see
the mist ripples
round your thin white neck
with dazzling crimson rings-
The signature of my love
my love
Published 27th Dec 2011
| Edited 28th Dec 2011
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27th Dec 2011 11:19pm
colours and worlds, imposed and superimposed on a tapestry of words depicting only what one can believe in. A consummation. At least thats how I see this. Lightbringer, Poet.
28th Dec 2011 1:04pm
Grace
You are the seer.
I am fortunate to be
the one that creates
the seen.
Bliss.
Curtsy,
S'
You are the seer.
I am fortunate to be
the one that creates
the seen.
Bliss.
Curtsy,
S'
28th Dec 2011 12:42pm
Hey S,
I loved the first line of this the first time I read it, I believe I first read this is the comp. It was the one I chose as runner-up. It's very, very elegant and the words stretch.
Few tweaks though this may only be my preference, and mainly is just my preference.
'uninhibited tear drops of
of unadulterated joy' are two 'of's needed there?
also...
'transcend the depths
of the land of the white snow' (there are three 'the's in this one line and I think it would benefit it if there were not)
Amazing job over all. It was pleasure to reread.
I loved the first line of this the first time I read it, I believe I first read this is the comp. It was the one I chose as runner-up. It's very, very elegant and the words stretch.
Few tweaks though this may only be my preference, and mainly is just my preference.
'uninhibited tear drops of
of unadulterated joy' are two 'of's needed there?
also...
'transcend the depths
of the land of the white snow' (there are three 'the's in this one line and I think it would benefit it if there were not)
Amazing job over all. It was pleasure to reread.
28th Dec 2011 1:03pm
LA
Yes. This was indeed the entry.
To be honest I simply wrote it
in that space-a little stream of
consciousness experiment.
Yesterday while I posted it here
made some changes. Hence the two
errors. Thanks for pointing them
out.
And yes, welcome and thank you'
dear poetess for your maiden visit.
Regards.
Curtsy,
S'
Yes. This was indeed the entry.
To be honest I simply wrote it
in that space-a little stream of
consciousness experiment.
Yesterday while I posted it here
made some changes. Hence the two
errors. Thanks for pointing them
out.
And yes, welcome and thank you'
dear poetess for your maiden visit.
Regards.
Curtsy,
S'
29th Dec 2011 10:48pm
Once more I find your poetic soul shines though.
Let the world keep seeing your wonderful gift.
Let the world keep seeing your wonderful gift.
30th Dec 2011 3:33pm
16th Aug 2013 2:15pm
Indeed lovely and bore warm emotions in motion.
Could'nt get better Sumeet!
Could'nt get better Sumeet!
