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As a teardrop approached my tongue
no, love is not sweet
it's salty, like tears, or sweat
and sometimes it stings
Published 22nd Nov 2019
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22nd Nov 2019 4:59pm
22nd Nov 2019 9:04pm
22nd Nov 2019 10:57pm
Indeed.
How often does love stay the same color?
Red. It is identified as this color, though it'll change through varied moods.
Love is a powerful emotion, where it seems all others are centered into it... fear and tension, as well.
It is not complete strength. It is not anyone's cure, because it is also everyone's disease.
This is a poem that is concisely written, and matches the writer's truest reflection on love.
How often does love stay the same color?
Red. It is identified as this color, though it'll change through varied moods.
Love is a powerful emotion, where it seems all others are centered into it... fear and tension, as well.
It is not complete strength. It is not anyone's cure, because it is also everyone's disease.
This is a poem that is concisely written, and matches the writer's truest reflection on love.
14th Jan 2020 2:15pm
That is very true... Nice little write broken. I always love a good senryu 😊
