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Save Water
Water is the basic human and all living beings essential requirement. Human body need enough water to support daily chores. As it is considered as essential element of any living being therefore it is called Life as well.
We have a lot of content and literature available on water and how to save or conserve it. After air, we have most important need is water. Without food people may survive for more than 30 days but without water, one cannot survive for only few days.
I have come across a beautiful poem on save water. Sarah has captured this concept well. Few verses are as follows:
We drink and use water,
Without knowing what it does,
What benefits it gives,
Water is around but has decreased,
Without knowing that the world is drying,
Read more………
https://poemtheart.com/save-water/
Water is the basic human and all living beings essential requirement. Human body need enough water to support daily chores. As it is considered as essential element of any living being therefore it is called Life as well.
We have a lot of content and literature available on water and how to save or conserve it. After air, we have most important need is water. Without food people may survive for more than 30 days but without water, one cannot survive for only few days.
I have come across a beautiful poem on save water. Sarah has captured this concept well. Few verses are as follows:
We drink and use water,
Without knowing what it does,
What benefits it gives,
Water is around but has decreased,
Without knowing that the world is drying,
Read more………
https://poemtheart.com/save-water/
Published 22nd Nov 2019
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Sarah shahzad is here, i love created through an expression of skill or imagination,
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23rd Nov 2019 5:31am
25th Nov 2019 10:45am
Thanks for your reply. An average person today can survive only for few days.
26th Nov 2019 12:17pm
this is true for the human body needs water to survive just like it needs air to breath but we take it for granted...nicely composed
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3rd Dec 2019 9:51pm
Hello Sarah, welcome to DUP. Thank you for posting this poem and the link to read it in full. Best regards, Josh.
4th Dec 2019 6:49am
5th Dec 2019 6:07am
Your poem encompasses what it takes for human survival. This makes your words a powerful statement on the most basic human need. In this day and age of toxic wastes polluting rivers and oceans your verse is all the more timely. John
5th Dec 2019 6:33am
8th Dec 2019 6:51am
https://www.businessinsider.com/nasa-data-shows-the-world-is-running-out-of-water-2015-6
It is terrifying to think what we have done to the earth..the threat of losing our fresh water supply if very real and frightening...It will take the entire world to fix it..if it can be fixed at all...
Thank you for writing your poem...it is a step in the right direction...we all need to take that step and keep walking until we no longer have to write about it..
It is terrifying to think what we have done to the earth..the threat of losing our fresh water supply if very real and frightening...It will take the entire world to fix it..if it can be fixed at all...
Thank you for writing your poem...it is a step in the right direction...we all need to take that step and keep walking until we no longer have to write about it..
9th Dec 2019 5:41am
12th Dec 2019 1:14pm
I love this poem! It made me think about my rain collecting system lol
Important message for everyone,nice writing.
Important message for everyone,nice writing.
13th Dec 2019 7:14am
Hey, sarah
I've read your poem in full and must say that its childlike simplicity betrays the innocence and essentiality of things we take for granted. We do take children for granted at times, not realising that they are the budding microcosmic continuance of life on this planet.
Same with your poem: we take water for granted, and yet, were we to consider what life would be like without it, we would boggle our minds with helplessness and despair.
Thank you for this wake-up call. The very breath we breathe seems like a whiff of air, but how long could we survive without its iterative return approximately 16 times per minute?
Yours sincerely
cab
I've read your poem in full and must say that its childlike simplicity betrays the innocence and essentiality of things we take for granted. We do take children for granted at times, not realising that they are the budding microcosmic continuance of life on this planet.
Same with your poem: we take water for granted, and yet, were we to consider what life would be like without it, we would boggle our minds with helplessness and despair.
Thank you for this wake-up call. The very breath we breathe seems like a whiff of air, but how long could we survive without its iterative return approximately 16 times per minute?
Yours sincerely
cab
14th Dec 2019 7:40am
Thanks Cab for your comments. All these comments provide me motivation to write and express my feeling especially when writing in English which is not my mother language. Poems I write are all about nature, flora, fauna, peace...... At the end its about learning and keep doing the right stuff and peace of mind.
Regards....Sarah
Regards....Sarah
13th Dec 2019 2:41pm
A subject that gets too little ink as a rule...thanks for the timely reminder...hugs, Ely
13th Dec 2019 4:01pm
Well said Sarah. We need to evolve in consciousness toward a more harmonious union with our environment, we are already suffering the consequences of our obtuse abuses.
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7th Jan 2020 6:05am
well it is hahaha :) thank you so much, i appreciate you taking the time to read and comment..
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