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DU, I'm Sorry
To the tough
and the tender
of my favorite
poetry site
How much have you
been flipped
flowing around
the waves of the trouble
I've shared?
If I've troubled you
and surely some I have
Please forgive me
for driving my keys with
an anxiety riddled mindset
If I can find a way
to shelter my mind
here
like less troubling waters
So as to not
tip your happy barge
I shall
and the tender
of my favorite
poetry site
How much have you
been flipped
flowing around
the waves of the trouble
I've shared?
If I've troubled you
and surely some I have
Please forgive me
for driving my keys with
an anxiety riddled mindset
If I can find a way
to shelter my mind
here
like less troubling waters
So as to not
tip your happy barge
I shall
Published 20th Nov 2019
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20th Nov 2019 11:09pm
a very sincere write I say get your anxiety out
if you are worried about stirring the waters
mark them as dark category
with a note to your readers beware of your dark ones
that's what I do...
great write...
love Brenda ❤
if you are worried about stirring the waters
mark them as dark category
with a note to your readers beware of your dark ones
that's what I do...
great write...
love Brenda ❤
21st Nov 2019 8:03am
20th Nov 2019 11:16pm
Happy? Nah, my barge is more like a pirate ship, I've been looking over my shoulder at every turn, for about as long as I can remember. 😅 No need to worry, if people didn't send out messages in a bottle, they would go insane. As comedian John Mulaney said, "I'll keep all my emotions right here, and then one day, I'll die." - from "New in Town"
21st Nov 2019 8:05am
I love that quote. I love pirates, if they don't work for an evil royal. ❤️
Thank you for the support!
Thank you for the support!
21st Nov 2019 00:10am
This is one of think we all should have written, we've all laid down our hearts on this site....
Sincerely written
Sincerely written
I'm surely glad you do post here, yes, we do that here a lot... and thank you for the sincere ink. ❤️
21st Nov 2019 6:17am
Echo Crimsin and Orc Pirate. I have not been greatly shocked - I have been on this site 7 years and some admissions have been heart rending but left me with sympathy for the writer and including them in my silent prayers.
I'm glad to know you here. This is a good place to explore tragedy, for sure. Rock on. ❤️
23rd Nov 2019 5:25pm
We all experience shaky waters at times, EW. That is what makes this site family. The dynamics are such that we can recover.
Well expressed.
Well expressed.
