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Crude and Lackluster
I'm a star here
in this big fucking sky
might not shine so bright
probably because of a
dimly lit life.
Can't see?
Get a flashlight.
in this big fucking sky
might not shine so bright
probably because of a
dimly lit life.
Can't see?
Get a flashlight.
Author's Note
My photo of whatever you can see.
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Re. Crude and Lackluster
20th Nov 2019 9:02pm
Black like my soul (there's my usual photographs)
You are a star here!!!
I'd shine a spotlight on this compact Write-goes straight to the throat!!!
You are a star here!!!
I'd shine a spotlight on this compact Write-goes straight to the throat!!!
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Re: Re. Crude and Lackluster
20th Nov 2019 9:07pm
Re. Crude and Lackluster
20th Nov 2019 9:37pm
Re. Crude and Lackluster
21st Nov 2019 00:59am
Re. Crude and Lackluster
21st Nov 2019 1:02am
I could see you I think beautiful Niki...
yes I can see a bright star here...
love Brenda ❤
yes I can see a bright star here...
love Brenda ❤
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Re. Crude and Lackluster
21st Nov 2019 6:10am
honestly........
"probably because of a
dimly lit life."
.........the empathy kicked in and for a moment my body chemistry changed for the worse.
Crude? definitely......
Lackluster? not on your life......
"probably because of a
dimly lit life."
.........the empathy kicked in and for a moment my body chemistry changed for the worse.
Crude? definitely......
Lackluster? not on your life......
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Re. Crude and Lackluster
24th Nov 2019 00:50am
get a flashlight. I'm here to shine, just not for you. Real shit, Sheherazade sometimes when I smoke and read your work I pause, from passing the J to you
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Re: Re. Crude and Lackluster
24th Nov 2019 2:12am
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24th Nov 2019 8:20am
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