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Tally-Ho, Sucker!
I told him a story it was long and twisted
had highs and real lows, he listened
and hung on every single word
never once realising it was all bullshit
and the ending he would have to
make up all on his own.
had highs and real lows, he listened
and hung on every single word
never once realising it was all bullshit
and the ending he would have to
make up all on his own.
Published 20th Nov 2019
Author's Note
My photo of junk at the bottom of a cut crystal bowl.
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20th Nov 2019 00:57am
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20th Nov 2019 1:22am
I found him in my junk drawer and threw him in with my cats bouncie balls lol dudes got shifty eyes.
20th Nov 2019 1:24am
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20th Nov 2019 2:01am
You are starting to remind me of a girl in High School, who would give false info and phone numbers to guys she didn't want to go out with ... Cool ... Bless and love ... .
20th Nov 2019 2:04am
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20th Nov 2019 1:42pm
20th Nov 2019 1:06pm
Pulling diamonds out on a whim...some folks deserve these actions
Yep definitely a girl...I love bouncy balls (my cat as well...hard to find anymore)
Excellent pic to pair with the Write...the girl has that devious look to her face.
Yep definitely a girl...I love bouncy balls (my cat as well...hard to find anymore)
Excellent pic to pair with the Write...the girl has that devious look to her face.
20th Nov 2019 1:41pm
I thought it was a little dude woth a 70s haircut
Nothing about it screamed girl lol i need my eyes checked
Nothing about it screamed girl lol i need my eyes checked
Its a genderless member with...... Leprosy?. WTF is going on with the bridge of its nose?
all stories and endings are bullshit to someones perspective ........................
all stories and endings are bullshit to someones perspective ........................
21st Nov 2019 11:31pm
22nd Nov 2019 1:28pm
I'm loving all these snippets accompanied by photographs taken by you, of objects you own. I think its not only cleverly done but quite originally honestly.
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