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Lost Amongst The Trees

      
     
     
Remember how I've scolded you      
when you've misbehaved.      
and the words that I have used      
for why that's childish ways.      
     
Like a sprout along with many      
growing in the woods      
time expects you to mature      
and stand as though you should      
     
The love for others I've tried to teach      
and pray that you have learned      
are lost on some around the world      
that's why they're not concerned      
     
It is this lack of caring      
that causes us to war      
and until we learn this      
mankind can never soar
 
 
 
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Author's Note
Poem: Inspired by Cold_Fusion

Title: Inspired by a comment from "Butters" on another's poem.
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