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"Amazed" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 30/12/2005

These Days I'm AMAZED ... !!!
In .... " SO MANY WAYS " ... !!!
 
People Seem To Think ...
That Things Are ... OKAY ... ?!?
 
A Law Passed Today ...
Has Left Me ... AMAZED ... !!!
 
The Government Say ...
Adoption's Okay ...
For People NOT Married ...
And Those Who Are Gay ...
 
Now Let's ...
Look At THAT ...
 
If You're  A Man ...
Who Likes To Sex MAN ...
 
Where Does A Kid ... ?
Fit ... INTO Your Stance ... ?!?
 
Unless Things Have CHANGED ...
In How Kids Are ... " Made " ... !?!
 
It Must Be ME ... !!!
 
But Now It Would Seem ...
Some Women Have ...
A DIFFERENT ... " Dream " ...
of ... Having A Child ...
WITHOUT A Man ... ?!?
 
OFF To The Sperm Bank ...
To ... FILL UP Their Tank ...
 
Women Like THESE ...
Now ... AMAZE Me ... !!!
 
They Say There's NO MEN ... !!!
So Become ... " Lesbians " ... ?!?
 
So ...  
Where's The Logic ... ???
Behind Their ... " Actions " ...
 
But CLEARLY Some Men ...
Have ... "little sense" ... ?!?
 
Here's A Story ...
About ... One of Them ...
 
A Guy I Once Knew ...
Will Give You Some Proof ...
 
So ... Check Out This Story ...
Cos' This One Is ... TRUE ... !!!
 
We're Drinking One Night ...
And Jokes Are In Flight ...
 
He Tells Us About ...
A Night On The Town ...
 
He's Out In A Bar ...
And Having A Laugh ...
But Felt ... Down Below ...
Was Ready To BLOW ... !!!
 
He Looked For The Toilet ...
So That He Could Go ...  
 
He Then Saw A Sign ...
So Moved ... DOUBLE TIME ... !!!!!
 
As He Got Close ...
A Man Then ... Approached ...
 
The Closer He Got ...  
The Man Tried To ... BLOCK ... ?!?  
 
My Mate Stepped .... ASIDE ....
When He Thought They'd COLLIDE ... !!!
 
Then The Door ... OPENED ...
It Was Made of ... GLASS ... !!!
 
It Was His ... REFLECTION ...  
He Tried To Let ... Pass ... !?!?!?!?!
 
It's NOT That He Did It ...
That Made My Sides ... S P L I T ... !!!!!

But That He Had ... " Let " ...
These Words Pass Through His Lips ... !!!!!!
 
My Mates And I Sat There ...
And Burst Into ... " FITS " ... !!!!!!!
 
See ... Some DO AMAZE ...
With Things That They Say ... !!!!
 
It's Clear That Some Drugs ...
Are Worse Than ... " Cocaine " ...
And CLEARLY Make Some People ...  
Act Quite ... INSANE ... !!!!!
 
Now Check Out This Script ...
For ... More Proof of This ... !!!
 
My Friend's In A World ...
With A ... " Coc'd Up Girl " ... !!!
 
She's Now Had His Child ...
But Lives ... Pretty WILD ... !!!
 
She Used To ... " Lap Dance " ...
You Get The ..... " Profile " ..... !!!
 
One Night She Decides ...
To ... Jump In The Car ...
 
But DOESN'T Go Far ... !!!
 
The ... Top of The Road ...
To ... Pick Up A Curry ...
 
But When She Gets Home ...
 
She's Clearly ...  
Quite WORRIED ... !?!
 
She Says To My Friend ...
 
"I went in the car,  
but when I came out,
forgot where I parked !"

 
My Friend Said To Her ...
 
"You're having a laugh !"
 
They Walked Up The Road ...
And What Do You Know ...
 
The Car Was There ... " SNIFFING " ...
A FAT LINE of ... " Coc' " ... !!!!!
 
Of Course That's A JOKE ... !!!
But ... Think of It Folks ...  
 
SHE'S ... Raising A Kid ...
AMAZING But ... SICK ... !!!
 
That's Child Gonna See ...
Some ... AMAZING Things ... !!!
 
I'm Now  Quite Amazed ...
By ... " TV Today " ... !!!
 
And By ... Modern Music ...
That FILLS Our Airwaves ... ?!?
 
Violence And Sex ...
Are Now The ... NEW FLEX ... !!!
 
From TV To ... " Big Screen " ...
To CD's ... With Decks ...
 
I'm Wondering Now ...
What's Coming ... Next ... ?!?!?
 
Alcohol Now ...
Is Fed Til' Some ... "DROWN" ... !!!
 
While Governments FROWN ...  
On ... Drunken Louts ... !!!
 
What Is THAT About ... !?!  
 
Whom EXACTLY ...
Are They ... Trying To Kid ... ?!?
 
That Laws Like THIS ...
Will Make Young Drunks ...
Wisely ... RESTRAIN ...
From Drinking ... Til' ...
They Drown Their Brain ... !?!
 
Things Like THIS ...
... Truly Amaze ... !!!
 
Cash Is CLEARLY ...
Such Laws ... AIM ... !!!
 
Here's One More Story ...
About A ... " Nightclub " ...
South Africans ... Aussies ...
And Kiwis ... ENTER ...
 
An Englishman Told Me ...
He Was ... Quite AMAZED ... !!!
 
By Things That He SAW ...
INSIDE ... This Place ...
 
He Told Me Straight ...
He Felt ... So ASHAMED ... !!!!!
 
He Liked A Good Drink ...
But ... What He SAW ...
Made Him FEEL SICK ... !!!!!
 
He Witnessed Some Things ...
He ... Could NOT BELIEVE ... !!!
 
Last Orders ... Had Gone ...
But Some Wanted ... MORE ... !!!!!
 
Believe It or NOT ...
He Said He Was SHOCKED ...
With What He THEN Saw ... !!!!!
 
Some People Resorted ...
To ... LICKING THE FLOOR ... !!!!!!!!!!!
 
AMAZING ... INDEED ...
A ... DISGUSTING BREED ... !!!!!
 
What Kind of Germs ...
LIVE In ... " THEIR JAWS " ... !?!?!
 
Be CAREFUL ... BEFORE ...
You KISS Them ... Fa' SURE ... !!!
 
You May Get MUCH WORSE ...
Than The  Odd ... COLD SORE ... !!!!!!
 
See ... That's What I Mean ...
Some People Do Things ...
That Are ... BEYOND Belief ... !?!
 
AMAZING Indeed ...
Like ... SLAVERY ... !!!
 
Or ... LUSTING For GREED ...
When Most Are In NEED ...
of ... Finding A Way ...
To AVOID ....... Poverty ... !!!
 
I Guess It's Just ME ...
 
Who ... Chooses To SEE ...
Things Such As These ...
In How People ... Be ...
 
And INCLUDES Them ... " IN " ...
 
...... " My Poetry " ......
 
Well I'm One of A Few ...
Who's Quick To USE ...
... AMAZING Things ...
That People DO ... !!!
 
They May Seem FUNNY ...
In ... DIFFERENT Ways ...
 
But STUNTS Like THESE ...
Are .... REALITY .... !!!!!
 
Government Ways ...
And FOOLISH DISPLAYS ...
And NOW ... Who Will Raise ...  
Our Children These Days ... ?!?
 
Sometimes Leave Me Feeling ...
Bemused And ........
 
.... " Amazed " ....
Written by BigVirge (Big Virge)
Published | Edited 11th Dec 2019
Author's Note
Stories are life, and inspire in so many ways. So, from news stories to the average dude, I reflected on a few and thus, here is the piece they inspired.
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