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Love Senryu 7.1
(i) Passing
it's suicide and death
that is Love's earthly shadow
one leads to other
(ii) Bridges
you burn your bridges
don't let the evil of love
seep or leak inside
(iii) Collection
The grim reaper's new
Job: Collecting all the dead
victims of Lovers
(iv) Fool
If you don't love me
do not play me for a fool
honesty beats lies
(v) Lost
Loving you was dumb
Love made me lose my mind
I've still not found it
(vi) Convenience
Love the one you're with?
utterly pointless advice
when they don't Love you
(vii) Pain
Never been in Love
consider yourself lucky
you have avoided pain
Published 13th Nov 2019
Author's Note
2nd of a set of 4
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
13th Nov 2019 6:48pm
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13th Nov 2019 6:53pm
thank you I wrote it as a set of 7 and it turned into a set of 4 x 7 such is mt muse LOL
Love is a very wonderful thing when its real - real love is in my view rare :-))))))))))))))))))))
thank you for the read and the comment :-)))
Love is a very wonderful thing when its real - real love is in my view rare :-))))))))))))))))))))
thank you for the read and the comment :-)))
13th Nov 2019 7:42pm
19th Nov 2019 7:01pm
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
13th Nov 2019 8:43pm
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19th Nov 2019 7:02pm
