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Love Senryu 7.0
(i) Burning
Love is like acid
it burns and it corrodes
dissolves the heart
(ii) Easy
Love was so easy
until the trust was broken
Hate is now easy
(iii) Trick
Just don't get elated
Love is like a magic trick
it will disappear
(iv) Temp
good morning my Love
in Love in the afternoon
by night it's over
(v) Wrong
all you need is Love
Really? money can buy love
The Beatles were wrong
(vi) Why
Love finally ends
with destruction and mayhem
why do we do it
(vii) Turntable
the good book is wrong
the wages of sin is cash
it's Love that's evil
Published 11th Nov 2019
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- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
13th Nov 2019 3:07pm
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19th Nov 2019 6:55pm
sadly I agree with your analysis :-)
Only a dog manages to give unconditional love
Only a dog manages to give unconditional love
