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Tonight
God it was perfect
Music
Dancing
Rides
The people working
... Transient
So appealing
Resembling me
Carnival dreams
Ends misery
This night
I'd live it a million times
A rickety
Backwards rollercoaster
With you
Sharing the ride
Music
Dancing
Rides
The people working
... Transient
So appealing
Resembling me
Carnival dreams
Ends misery
This night
I'd live it a million times
A rickety
Backwards rollercoaster
With you
Sharing the ride
Published 10th Nov 2019
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10th Nov 2019 1:29pm
11th Nov 2019 10:35pm
Anonymous
25th Nov 2019 3:02pm
Babydoll, I can honestly say that your piece is a great example of contemporary love poetry! The poem took my thoughts to carnivals past and your apt description makes me think of carnivals future!
26th Nov 2019 4:16am
Such mystery and charm lies in the carny life. I swear I lived it once! Thanks for the read and comment :)
