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red fingernail polish
you painted my soul with red fingernail polish
you got from a gumball machine for five cents
a cheap garish red
bright and noisy
because my quiet days spoke too loudly to you
in fact they scream
you run with a whore off I 82
scoring thrill by the minute
I wasn't like her
my reserve made your blood run cold
your betrayal made mine boil
you took our relationship off the fire
still, I simmered
big smoky plumes of denial fill the air around us
I deny my anger
you cover yours
we love each other
sometimes
I was once wild turkey
hundred proof lust with you
not anymore
I still love you
sometimes
my soul is painted
a cheap and violent red
are you thrilled?
I still love you
sometimes
Author's Note
fiction
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Re. red fingernail polish
10th Nov 2019 4:59am
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10th Nov 2019 5:01am
thank you dearest Me for the love on this write I deeply appreciate you... goodnight my friend...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. red fingernail polish
10th Nov 2019 6:04am
Emotions are fragile. They must be dealt with care hehe. You're on a roll with the ink. Great stuff.
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14th Nov 2019 5:19pm
thank you graciously dearest DC I deeply appreciate your thoughts on my pages...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. red fingernail polish
10th Nov 2019 6:22am
Fiction ? Sounds like something i have lived through. Good write Brenda .
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. red fingernail polish
14th Nov 2019 5:20pm
thank you beautiful Kitty in many ways this isn't fiction... I deeply appreciate you sharing...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. red fingernail polish
10th Nov 2019 6:41am
Re: Re. red fingernail polish
14th Nov 2019 5:21pm
thank you beautiful Cee Cee for checking out my pages and for sharing your thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. red fingernail polish
14th Nov 2019 5:22pm
thank you dearest Poet at first I was kind of like I don't know if I really like this write but then I realized how much personal truth it held and it grew on me... I'm happy you liked it...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. red fingernail polish
10th Nov 2019 5:49pm
Betrayal is a difficult pill to swallow. But, over time it dissolves in the throat if it doesn't become bitterly lodged. When the pain of staying together outweighs the pain of being apart - it's time to separate.
I hope things get better, Brenda.
I hope things get better, Brenda.
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Re: Re. red fingernail polish
14th Nov 2019 5:23pm
thank you dearest Vati for your understanding heart and wisdom...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. red fingernail polish
10th Nov 2019 9:28pm
As I said to someone recently...It is not that your betrayal hurt me, it is simply that I can no longer trust you that matters. Powerful ink Brenda.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. red fingernail polish
14th Nov 2019 5:24pm
yes dearest Harry that's it exactly... thank you for sharing your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. red fingernail polish
Anonymous
16th Nov 2019 11:28pm
a poem that keeps the serious reader "involved." You translate your feelings very well-
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21st Nov 2019 4:48am