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Good Day Sir
The rain stopped
and the snow began
nothing had been flooded
yet things were washed away
not down a river but out of my mind
I started to skip and feel something
like happy, that was short lived
I fell and busted my ass
on the wet frosty grass.
and the snow began
nothing had been flooded
yet things were washed away
not down a river but out of my mind
I started to skip and feel something
like happy, that was short lived
I fell and busted my ass
on the wet frosty grass.
Published 9th Nov 2019
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9th Nov 2019 1:20pm
9th Nov 2019 1:21pm
9th Nov 2019 6:18pm
Gotta watch that ass-grass stuff. 'Least it weren't con-crete.
good show, nikkimoe
good show, nikkimoe
10th Nov 2019 2:27am
10th Nov 2019 00:57am
Ouch ... To lose oneself to the much needed euphoria of a moment only to be brought down by physical reality ... Sucks ... Good write and really good pic ... Bless and love ... ..
10th Nov 2019 2:28am
10th Nov 2019 2:05am
There is something magical about snow and this captures that initial magic perfectly. Before reality sets in, that is!
Great metaphor for life in general!
Great metaphor for life in general!
10th Nov 2019 2:28am
10th Nov 2019 1:18pm
I will never stop skipping Nik
The ass to grass is where I center or escape...tis choice
Reality is there only if an absolute makes me face it...other than that-Skip along.
I despise the overuse of a word, many become fave...so here I am again wishing to say "Witty" ...godamn the pusher man...
This Write was slick, the type of mind that is on constant hyper thought-Intelligent -Writ!!!
The ass to grass is where I center or escape...tis choice
Reality is there only if an absolute makes me face it...other than that-Skip along.
I despise the overuse of a word, many become fave...so here I am again wishing to say "Witty" ...godamn the pusher man...
This Write was slick, the type of mind that is on constant hyper thought-Intelligent -Writ!!!
10th Nov 2019 2:59pm
