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Rejected
she weeps bitterly
her children do not listen
hardened hearts know best
truth cannot be found
amongst the darkness within
the light has gone dim
the truth is spoken
but her children's backs are turned
away from her voice
she weeps loudly
oh if they should only turn
a flame would be seen
and they would return
home with loving arms waiting
to embrace them all
her children do not listen
hardened hearts know best
truth cannot be found
amongst the darkness within
the light has gone dim
the truth is spoken
but her children's backs are turned
away from her voice
she weeps loudly
oh if they should only turn
a flame would be seen
and they would return
home with loving arms waiting
to embrace them all
Published 6th Nov 2019
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6th Nov 2019 2:15am
Wow Life......I can see me all thru this ink......heart tugging that’s for sure......can relate.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
6th Nov 2019 2:31am
11th Nov 2019 9:20pm
We are seeing so much more of this in our fragmented world...a powerful and poignant poem L.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
12th Nov 2019 2:35am
Anonymous
11th Dec 2019 6:53am
The pain in this feels very real and I think this is the thought that carries it through to the end. As a collection of haikus, there are a couple of syllable counts that are out, however this doesn’t detract from the enjoyment of the piece.
Thanks for sharing.
-M
Thanks for sharing.
-M
