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The Devil in Love
This card speaks of a love,
A love that feels like an addiction
It is all too much, far too much
You're unable to eat or sleep
Can't get them out of your mind
Such a love can evolve into more
Into a balanced and happy love
But it can also become painful
Obsessions rise, the need to control
To contain and to dominate your love
Unless you both can move beyond
Far beyond just the physical joys
A love that feels like an addiction
It is all too much, far too much
You're unable to eat or sleep
Can't get them out of your mind
Such a love can evolve into more
Into a balanced and happy love
But it can also become painful
Obsessions rise, the need to control
To contain and to dominate your love
Unless you both can move beyond
Far beyond just the physical joys
Published 5th Nov 2019
Author's Note
This is about pulling the devil card in tarot.
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5th Nov 2019 8:41pm
More to love than joyful physicalities
A Real love that burns with a constant yearn for the others only happiness doesn't require such physicality
Well written
A Real love that burns with a constant yearn for the others only happiness doesn't require such physicality
Well written
5th Nov 2019 11:16pm
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- Edited 3rd Dec 2019 3:45pm
6th Nov 2019 1:55am
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9th Nov 2019 1:55am
I like ominous tinge to this, the slight repetition of words delivered to accentuate the emotion.
Then the latter half "bit it can also become painful" (wow).
Excellent write blue.
Then the latter half "bit it can also become painful" (wow).
Excellent write blue.
9th Nov 2019 2:38pm
It's a warning about relationships that only have passion in them. When passions change, and they do, it's not good for either party involved.
