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[ Birthday 2019 ] Target Audience
Accustomed
to raising my bow skywards
shutting my eyes and
letting go -)>
wondering
where the arrowed words
are going to land ..........
It feels so unnatural---
blasting you right between the eyes
at close range with feather-shafted
verse
Published 5th Nov 2019
| Edited 24th Oct 2021
Author's Note
Inspired by a recent comment from Ahavati ❤📝
Yeah, she does that a lot
Yeah, she does that a lot
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5th Nov 2019 1:58pm
LOL! It doesn't hurt! I promise!
Thank you! Your poetry has really evolved, particularly in the last year alone. It's straight as an arrow! 💜💑💋
Thank you! Your poetry has really evolved, particularly in the last year alone. It's straight as an arrow! 💜💑💋
5th Nov 2019 2:04pm
You've done wonders honing my arrowheads and getting me to focus. It's taken a lot of flat tires and leaky swimming pools to get here. 💜💑💋
5th Nov 2019 2:09pm
5th Nov 2019 7:54pm
"looking down, the arrow surprised me"
uh huh
your writing's improved so so much. a great pleasure to read you.
uh huh
your writing's improved so so much. a great pleasure to read you.
5th Nov 2019 8:15pm
Thank you. I probably still can't write a limerick to save my life. I have zero sense of metre and syllable count. I know my limitations LOL
5th Nov 2019 9:32pm
Inspired words - absolutely - crafted from an inspired experience. {In the face of this write, Limericks can deservedly go back to the bottom of the in-tray :)) }
5th Nov 2019 9:38pm
Thank you, Josh. The inspirations from Ahavati's comments and poetry and simply being herself are uncalculable at this point.
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