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[ Short Shorts ] There's no MATE in TEAM
when playing childish
games of divide and conquer;
it's only a matter of time before
you end up with no one
left or right at your side
games of divide and conquer;
it's only a matter of time before
you end up with no one
left or right at your side
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Re. There's no MATE in TEAM
4th Nov 2019 12:33pm
Dear JB,
I knew it! I’ve always felt there was an “I” in team.
Eventually we all realize we stand alone. Perhaps some support along the way to encourage our inner courage. But, alone we must decide to do whatever.
JB you’re in the deep end of the pool here. I dig it. H🌷
I knew it! I’ve always felt there was an “I” in team.
Eventually we all realize we stand alone. Perhaps some support along the way to encourage our inner courage. But, alone we must decide to do whatever.
JB you’re in the deep end of the pool here. I dig it. H🌷
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Re: Re. There's no MATE in TEAM
4th Nov 2019 6:03pm
Thank you, Honoria. I better get back to the shallow end of the pool because I can't swim.
Re. There's no MATE in TEAM
4th Nov 2019 6:43pm
Re: Re. There's no MATE in TEAM
4th Nov 2019 7:12pm
Thank you, Poppy. I seem to be going through a phase where I can't focus on anything lengthier.
Re. There's no MATE in TEAM
4th Nov 2019 9:17pm
You're bringing your word play "A" game again sir! I'm loving it.
Great piece.
Great piece.
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Re: Re. There's no MATE in TEAM
4th Nov 2019 9:24pm
Re. There's no MATE in TEAM
Ah, but there is Mate in Team - all one has to do is scramble the letters. . .
I love these new offerings; they're swift arrows guaranteed to hit the target every time. xo
I love these new offerings; they're swift arrows guaranteed to hit the target every time. xo
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Re: Re. There's no MATE in TEAM
5th Nov 2019 1:39am
Thank you. xo
Though it feels a bit unnatural; I'm so accustomed to raising my bow skyward, shutting my eyes and letting go.
Well, damn. That sounded like another short poem in itself.
Though it feels a bit unnatural; I'm so accustomed to raising my bow skyward, shutting my eyes and letting go.
Well, damn. That sounded like another short poem in itself.
Re. There's no MATE in TEAM
5th Nov 2019 2:22am
I rather like not having anyone to the left or right of me. The clarity of silence is amazing (just speaking for me). Good write though.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re. There's no MATE in TEAM
6th Nov 2019 12:30pm
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6th Nov 2019 12:34pm