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Hell-Bent Earth'World
saying say pleas
enunciate the joke
more precisely
for the benefit of they
who listen
preoccupied with the timbre
of the echos voiced by themSelves alone.
(many of us stay resolutely in this mode....many/most)
for all the crying out loud that I am, any moments of joy will
be subject of the grief for my child who is lost to this world
among so many dead via a soon to be forgotten life time, in this
equally soon forgotten earth'world, which we be hell-bent on
destroying
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Published 4th Nov 2019
Author's Note
Done run out of inspirations.
Couldn't you tell?
Couldn't you tell?
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4th Nov 2019 9:43pm
Nice Daniel...a dark corner of thoughts and the human condition my friend.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
5th Nov 2019 2:45am
4th Nov 2019 10:33pm
Our bodies will all be food for Earth'worms. I'm sure they will inherit the Earth. And cockroaches. The best we can do is be kind to each other and leave some decent poetry behind.
5th Nov 2019 2:48am
5th Nov 2019 00:07am
I appreciate the sentiment, but our very existence as a hummin race, species, our world, all are stuck in a finite box.The BOX floats in an inconceivable Eternity Everything here must die, whether one sees it from a collective or individual
perspective. Eventually there will be No Body around to "remember" anything.
I won't forget Leah. You won't forget her, and a handful of remember-engendered beings won;t forget, but in 2,3,4, generations. Imagine that, will ye?
perspective. Eventually there will be No Body around to "remember" anything.
I won't forget Leah. You won't forget her, and a handful of remember-engendered beings won;t forget, but in 2,3,4, generations. Imagine that, will ye?
5th Nov 2019 3:42am
Someone reading your book about her, I can absolutely imagine that. You've immortalized you both.
5th Nov 2019 4:01am
Bless ye, dear......but even immortalization is finite. Disappears. All those "concepts" will be gone with us.
5th Nov 2019 4:07am
And yet we know of things thousands of years ago. Immortality would be boring for me. I am ready for more experiences after this. I do what I can do now - for those I can do it for regardless of whether or not I'll ever be remembered for it.
