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Last Ballad Of The Bumblebees
Between fire and water
smoke rings billowing
immeasurably
complex vibrations gyrating
sombre coloured clouds
breeze
as the gust of ghosts
pass on through
time
ticks a starry night
awaiting the morning dew
mockingbirds
weep from decayed branches
fallen oaks reminiscing
furniture
as though earth and air
collided forming ash
Published 3rd Nov 2019
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3rd Nov 2019 11:24pm
You have some delightful lines here that generate solid images, a splendid write especially the close.
4th Nov 2019 11:05am
Dark Write Carpe'
This witty turn of Words, plays fun to the tongue, but scrapes the darkness and puts it full frontal!!!
Peace-Brother
This witty turn of Words, plays fun to the tongue, but scrapes the darkness and puts it full frontal!!!
Peace-Brother
