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[ Spiritual ] Revelations
Trust
requires having patience
and the sense to just
revel in the elation
of knowing no matter
what happens next
leaving you vexed
perplexed, perhaps
feeling hexed---
all those big small dreams of yours?
are always coming true
Nothing
ever stands between
them and you
except
for everything
thrown in the way
including kitchen sinks
and other scenarios cased worst
when one thinks the Universe
must do!
this or that
first
Published 3rd Nov 2019
| Edited 30th Jul 2020
Author's Note
for all the big small dreamers 🌌
for the comp "SAME TITLE POEMS" @
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11078
for the comp "SAME TITLE POEMS" @
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11078
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3rd Nov 2019 11:48am
Like i always say, " if life throws a kitchen sink at you at least you can wash your dishes now." Is it object lesson or an obstacle...
Good work Mr Blaze.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Good work Mr Blaze.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
3rd Nov 2019 11:52am
3rd Nov 2019 4:03pm
Like i always say, " if life throws a kitchen sink at you at least you can wash your dishes now."
... not if you're a student in a 1970s Winter in Newcastle-upon-Tyne - the dishes freeze unwashed-up in the sink overnight :))
... not if you're a student in a 1970s Winter in Newcastle-upon-Tyne - the dishes freeze unwashed-up in the sink overnight :))
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3rd Nov 2019 1:03pm
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3rd Nov 2019 1:15pm
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3rd Nov 2019 1:51pm
Dear JB,
What a lovely, true and uplifting piece! Kind of like that whole good things come in small packages, good things come to those who wait etc. Yet, I like the way you’ve penned this way better over those! H🌷
What a lovely, true and uplifting piece! Kind of like that whole good things come in small packages, good things come to those who wait etc. Yet, I like the way you’ve penned this way better over those! H🌷
3rd Nov 2019 3:20pm
3rd Nov 2019 4:07pm
I like the way the poem takes trust into the realm into the realm of everyday obstacles as a way of testing the initial trust. A very human poem charting life through an unknown universal agenda.
3rd Nov 2019 4:35pm
3rd Nov 2019 4:15pm
thank You for causing me to smile (and laugh)
the final stanza is pure platinum!!
the final stanza is pure platinum!!
3rd Nov 2019 4:32pm
4th Nov 2019 8:52pm
"Revel in the elation" smack right in my face! Love the word play and the truth behind it.
Well done sir. Good luck in the comp.
Well done sir. Good luck in the comp.
4th Nov 2019 8:57pm
Thank you, Wally! I need all the luck I can get. And profiles that I have.
