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Just Out of Reach
It's getting harder
to remember your laughter,
It is leaving me.
to remember your laughter,
It is leaving me.
Written by
PencilScribbles
(Scribbles)
Published 2nd Nov 2019
| Edited 12th Dec 2019
Author's Note
When people are gone, after a while, you find it hard to recall things you thought you'd never forget.
My mother lost her mom to breast cancer when she was 13, she cannot picture her mother's face anymore. She doesn't remember the sound of her laughter or the sound of her voice.
The few pictures she has are the only memories she has: memories of pictures, not memories of the person that used to be.
Worried that I'd forget people that I've lost (which is hard enough), I looked up how to protect and recall my memories.
The trick is: don't try to remember specifically what they look like but focus on moments, things that happened.
My mother lost her mom to breast cancer when she was 13, she cannot picture her mother's face anymore. She doesn't remember the sound of her laughter or the sound of her voice.
The few pictures she has are the only memories she has: memories of pictures, not memories of the person that used to be.
Worried that I'd forget people that I've lost (which is hard enough), I looked up how to protect and recall my memories.
The trick is: don't try to remember specifically what they look like but focus on moments, things that happened.
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Re. Just Out of Reach
2nd Nov 2019 7:56pm
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6th Nov 2019 4:41am
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2nd Nov 2019 8:59pm
I read somewhere, each time we remember, we are remembering the last time we thought of it. I don't quite know why that struck me so that I still think of it occasionally. I guess the concept, instead of remembering the moment, we only remember back so far, it continues its inexorable path into the fog and oblivion, for those of us without an eidetic memory. Even for them, as we change, the reference point must lose it's validity. Anyways, rambling. This was a touching write, nice use of brevity.
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6th Nov 2019 4:44am
Thank you, Daniel, I've heard the same somewhere along the way and it's funny that you mention that because I had basically the same thought cross my mind when I was typing out the Author's note. ❤
I love your insightful comments, you have a great gift.
I love your insightful comments, you have a great gift.
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3rd Nov 2019 1:09am
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3rd Nov 2019 7:36am
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This brought back my memories of when I lost my parents. Thank you.
I only recently acknowledged the loss in a poem and it was one of the hardest things I've ever done.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/343641-empty-rooms---part-1-leaving/
I only recently acknowledged the loss in a poem and it was one of the hardest things I've ever done.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/343641-empty-rooms---part-1-leaving/
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10th Nov 2019 11:29am
No, thank you. Your response was beautiful.
Losing parents is one of the hardest things we can face in this life. 😔
Take care and you're very welcome. ❤
Losing parents is one of the hardest things we can face in this life. 😔
Take care and you're very welcome. ❤