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~THEE PATIENT PSYCH/CARDIAC PATIENT~foto by:dkzk2011
CRAZYHEART PEOPLES~~~~~~
byDanKozak/onFriday,December23,2011at12:03pm
~A One-Act ComicBook Opera Wit'out Music~
~A Paean t'all thee blessed CrazyHeartPeople eye-have-known~
like every day all most every day or some of
every day, 4get
2take med-i'cation til feelike it
feels like (like it feels, or may have felt like)
likelike
headboneskull gonna crack open & greybrain mat'ter
e'jackle'ate itsElf t'splat
thee ceiling AND
wired'up scarchest torso gonna bust-at-seams&
squirtlate rich'red life-bloods all
over EveryThing----
sit/wonder a minute why 'feel' thisway, then:
"o yeah...have Life Sustaining Medicine f'or this
silliness!"....&nexthing yeknow, everything is
EveryThing juslike'spose 2be
like g'odd bless'ed Be
______________dkzk23dcmbr2011______________
byDanKozak/onFriday,December23,2011at12:03pm
~A One-Act ComicBook Opera Wit'out Music~
~A Paean t'all thee blessed CrazyHeartPeople eye-have-known~
like every day all most every day or some of
every day, 4get
2take med-i'cation til feelike it
feels like (like it feels, or may have felt like)
likelike
headboneskull gonna crack open & greybrain mat'ter
e'jackle'ate itsElf t'splat
thee ceiling AND
wired'up scarchest torso gonna bust-at-seams&
squirtlate rich'red life-bloods all
over EveryThing----
sit/wonder a minute why 'feel' thisway, then:
"o yeah...have Life Sustaining Medicine f'or this
silliness!"....&nexthing yeknow, everything is
EveryThing juslike'spose 2be
like g'odd bless'ed Be
______________dkzk23dcmbr2011______________
Published 24th Dec 2011
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24th Dec 2011 11:07pm
Oh this is wonderful. I can relate to the forgetting of medication, you mind splits into two halves and releases itself in many directions.
25th Dec 2011 4:37pm
thank you, dear.......th'devil gets it's due (dooby-dooby-doo)& may Thee Angels sing ye blessings of EveryDay Xmaz.....[or somekinda chit like that).......witLOVE fr'om an old-guy who should be more'or'less dead.......
27th Dec 2011 5:30am
...than the most I read today. Language is trying to break into something more. It wins against the medication yet and may break free if you don't put a childproof cap on it.
27th Dec 2011 6:01pm
Thank ye, Steve-----always nice t'hear some'one 'gets it' relatively close to wherever it is "It" might have come from-------grazie
