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BROKEN
Heart beats
Like a room full of prisoners vying for escape
Pulling and pushing
Heart beats wildly against weak rib cages
The sheer force threatening to pull down the gaol bars..
Heart cracks
Like a mud house in harsh harmattan
Squeaking and squawking
Heart cracks steadily amidst putrid memories
The poignant smell snuffing out beautiful images
Heart breaks
Like a dam forcefully broken
Rushing and gushing
Heart breaks swiftly, emptying its bloody bank
The shatter signalling a painful end!
Published 31st Oct 2019
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31st Oct 2019 10:33pm
31st Oct 2019 10:36pm
1st Nov 2019 1:11am
1st Nov 2019 5:55pm
Powerful, emotion-filled poetry... Your imagery is fantastic. Your similes are really creative, and the whole thing was structured very neatly. Great writing!
30th Dec 2019 1:12pm
30th Dec 2019 3:21pm
30th Dec 2019 1:17pm
heart broken is the worst thing to go through you expressed it well like you said that to will pass for what is another trash becomes anothers treasure always remember what doesnt kill you only makes you a strong fighter to become a warrior nicely composed...respect
30th Dec 2019 1:21pm
30th Dec 2019 1:24pm
your very welcome poetess keep your head it aint over till the most highest spiritual soul says its over you have alot of love to give to someone who returns the same love...respect
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