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Incomplete Human
Incomplete
I am incomplete
Driven crazy by the wrong wiring
The diagram not followed
Makes no difference now
Burned out circuit board
Leaving diagnosis irrelevant
Incomplete human
Faults within carry on
Regardless of feeling
The sound of grinding gears
Trying to engage understanding
Intermittent cohesion
Loss of concentration
Brings information overload
Just another degree of distress
Blind frustration
Under abnormal pressures
The friction of cells
So out of touch
I am incomplete
Driven crazy by the wrong wiring
The diagram not followed
Makes no difference now
Burned out circuit board
Leaving diagnosis irrelevant
Incomplete human
Faults within carry on
Regardless of feeling
The sound of grinding gears
Trying to engage understanding
Intermittent cohesion
Loss of concentration
Brings information overload
Just another degree of distress
Blind frustration
Under abnormal pressures
The friction of cells
So out of touch
Published 31st Oct 2019
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31st Oct 2019 4:34pm
not wired 'wrong'
wired differently
and non-auties still learning
how to read your plans
no one
no one feels 'complete' for most their lives. there are times when we reach that.
before i understood anything about the condition, and well before my h.f autistic son was diagnosed, i used to think he had something missing. i now know better. he simply connects, or doesn't, on different circuits.
your poem feels so despairing, it makes my heart ache.
wired differently
and non-auties still learning
how to read your plans
no one
no one feels 'complete' for most their lives. there are times when we reach that.
before i understood anything about the condition, and well before my h.f autistic son was diagnosed, i used to think he had something missing. i now know better. he simply connects, or doesn't, on different circuits.
your poem feels so despairing, it makes my heart ache.
31st Oct 2019 7:09pm
I used to work as an Electronic Tech for a major U.S. computer and electronics company
and sometimes what's called for to fix the problem is to
make everything smaller
thereby, making the problem more manageable.
Brother,
i could be Your electronic tech and if ever You need to vent...........
i am a good listener and would not make light or minimize You
i have references if You need to hear from them.
______________Love the metaphor here with Your being an autistic spirit
and sometimes what's called for to fix the problem is to
make everything smaller
thereby, making the problem more manageable.
Brother,
i could be Your electronic tech and if ever You need to vent...........
i am a good listener and would not make light or minimize You
i have references if You need to hear from them.
______________Love the metaphor here with Your being an autistic spirit
31st Oct 2019 7:32pm
Thanks very much for the offer, these are my vents, yes they can be raw but at no point was any autistic person was injured in the making of this spill
31st Oct 2019 7:34pm
31st Oct 2019 7:43pm
We are friends on Facebook, grant I don’t talk much and I post stupid things buts that’s just my childish humour
LMFAO @ us!!
Brother,
don't ever stop!
Holding onto our inner child is what keeps us young!
I truly believe it's my downfall to my still being alive on this planet despite my willingness and want to not be here.
I LOVE Your fucking humor and if it's deemed childish
then so effin be it!!
You and me might be the last people laughing when the end of the world comes............
Brother,
don't ever stop!
Holding onto our inner child is what keeps us young!
I truly believe it's my downfall to my still being alive on this planet despite my willingness and want to not be here.
I LOVE Your fucking humor and if it's deemed childish
then so effin be it!!
You and me might be the last people laughing when the end of the world comes............
