Just an elevator?

that only goes up and down??  

~ frown~  

Child, you're lacking imagination  
See you later, Alligator!  
As for you, Crocodile ...  
~ smile ~  
I wish you  
would stay a while;  
take a further tour with me  
Together, we can explore the four  
corners of my factory ( and there may  
even be a room or two or three  
I myself have never seen before! )  
We can zoom about in this fabulous  
glass observatory that zips and glides  
and dips but never collides as it flip de trips  
and loop de loops -  
Oh! Look down there!  
Let's say goodbye  
~ wave ~  
to the Gloops!  
Hey, Little Bucket Boy!  
There's more to this silly story  
you have yet to read  
and I need -  
~ cough ~  
and I think  
you would be great at  
keeping me company  
Charlie, would you take a ride with me?  
Author's Note
for the comp "Tales of the Unexpected" @

inspired by Dahl's "Charlie And The Chocolate Factory"
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