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Rock
As he grabs me by my throat
and pulls me in close
Whispers in my ear
To dissolve all my fears
He lets me know I’m safe
Then bows his head to say grace
Eating my pussy like it’s his last meal
Drug addiction he’s my pill
Even though we’re friends
Tonight lets play pretend
I lick myself off his lips
His hands on my back he grips
And just as my soul leaves my body
He flips me over and I start riding
Choking me and stroking me
Holding me and folding me
My god those strokes
I yell out I’m close
I see the enthusiasm in his eyes
He digs deeper driving me wild
I usually cream but tonight I drench him
Holy water I’ve blessed him
and pulls me in close
Whispers in my ear
To dissolve all my fears
He lets me know I’m safe
Then bows his head to say grace
Eating my pussy like it’s his last meal
Drug addiction he’s my pill
Even though we’re friends
Tonight lets play pretend
I lick myself off his lips
His hands on my back he grips
And just as my soul leaves my body
He flips me over and I start riding
Choking me and stroking me
Holding me and folding me
My god those strokes
I yell out I’m close
I see the enthusiasm in his eyes
He digs deeper driving me wild
I usually cream but tonight I drench him
Holy water I’ve blessed him
Published 30th Oct 2019
| Edited 11th Nov 2022
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Anonymous
- Edited 5th Jan 2021 6:45am
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30th Oct 2019 4:08pm
sweet words to read like the way it ends drenched him in holy water saving the cream
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Anonymous
30th Oct 2019 8:31pm
Excellent erotica. A near fatal, but exciting experience. For both parties. Everyone happy. Good ink
31st Oct 2019 1:19pm
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5th Dec 2019 5:40am
incredible writing dear..!! beautiful and touching piece.. i'm write as well, butt this one lovely..
6th Dec 2019 4:17am
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The last line could read like an oath with a well-placed comma or exclamation: "Holy water! I've blessed him." (In my own poems I have described such an overflow as an 'anointing'.) In fact it has just sparked a short rhyme I have just posted in this section, My Overflow of Pleasure.
