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Lost Girl
Lost girl free mind
Free soul lost kind
No longer prisoner to her trauma
She radiates an unforgettable aura
Twinkling eyes shiny smile
The kind of girl you won’t forget for a while
She has a mind full of dreams
Her unfulfilled potentials bursting at the seams
She’s a lost girl a free soul with a free mind and she’s of a lost kind
Free soul lost kind
No longer prisoner to her trauma
She radiates an unforgettable aura
Twinkling eyes shiny smile
The kind of girl you won’t forget for a while
She has a mind full of dreams
Her unfulfilled potentials bursting at the seams
She’s a lost girl a free soul with a free mind and she’s of a lost kind
Published 30th Oct 2019
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30th Oct 2019 3:55am
Nicely rhymed , Mi'lady...
And well phrased and stated in twists and turns...
I shall be looking into your other writings
And well phrased and stated in twists and turns...
I shall be looking into your other writings
30th Oct 2019 11:50am
10th Nov 2019 7:00pm
There is a nice flow to the syllabic harmony of your write. The message has a ring of genuine candor that resonates. My only suggestion would be to abandon rhyme and flow unabashed on the page, rhyme will come in unexpected organic forms. I tend to keep mine sparse, for impact. Nice work and thank you for sharing with us.🙏🏻
28th Nov 2019 1:15am
not lost just misplaced the imagery sweet as the words flow free just as her spirit is set free
nicely done
nicely done
6th Dec 2019 7:37am
Such a wonderful poem, passionate and beautiful write.. please check my site to.. :)
Potential, certainly. Nice words. I like it a lot.
Her unfulfilled potential bursting at the seams
She’s a lost girl, free soul, free mind
One of a kind
Is how I would have ended the poem.
Her unfulfilled potential bursting at the seams
She’s a lost girl, free soul, free mind
One of a kind
Is how I would have ended the poem.
21st Dec 2019 7:33am
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- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
22nd Dec 2019 7:02pm
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