Yearning

Last verse favourite one. Plays much on the words leave and leaving.

I like weaving verses together and unpicking their possibilities

Oh what a yearning feeling it is to touch the deepness of the mind and heart speaking to the body and soul through silent touches of not wanting to leave but you must be leaving before the yearning takes control... Beautifully written dear Queen

it may need many more re-writes to get it right

Sometimes we have to take a closer look at the images and words we write in a different kind of LIGHT as they appear in provoking pieces that projects feelings and emotions and thoughts for you will be able to see the big picture of your thoughts manifest your true potential let your thoughts flow into whispers from pen and paper 😉✍👊🙏

you can change things over and over and still they do not seem to be right

The truth of the matter is that we can change the context of the words but yet until we are pleased with the script in its true nature as a writer it will be subject to changes for we have to take a step back and regroup for just image someone else is reading it what do you want your readers to be able to take away into there mind and heart and spiritual soul and understand what you are expressing from pen to paper ✍👊🙏🤗

that makes sense

FOSHO dear poetess for we are our worst to question that what we write on pen from paper let it flow naturally ✍👊🤗🙏

Lovely perversions echoed in the manipulation of that one line.

there are many ways to crack an egg

It is a beautiful shadow

Its echoes are felt

the lines run deep to the soul as the mind drinks them in

I remember enjoying writing this even though I was sad at the time - it may need a refresh now

Always leave them wanting more. (;

Losty

good plan - smiles

A song of beauty and desire to inspire me to dream again. Your elegance is matched with your ineluctable wit. And I am privileged to be a beneficiary of your muse.

XoXoXo
John

you are always so kind in your commentaries