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[ SK ] When White Blacks Out

 
It poured down from the rafter  
followed with familiar, but far away  
voices displaced by the  
laughter  
     all about  
   
laughter  
    all about her  
   
Erased, a book blank paged---  
author replaced by a thing enraged  
     when white blacks out  
     when white blacks out  
   
behind bars coming uncaged  
after seeing through blood red  
     when white blacks out  
     when white blacks out  
   
never again to be upstaged  
willing everyone around her dead  
   
when  
   
     White    
   
blacks  
   
     out  
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
( previous version )    
   
   
   
Erased, a book blank paged -    
author replaced by an enraged    
thing behind bars coming uncaged    
when white blacks out    
     
Hear their laughter?      
voices displaced said    
Willing everyone around her dead    
after seeing through blood red    
when white blacks out    
     
when    
     
White      
     
blacks    
     
out    
     
 
JohnnyBlaze
Written by JohnnyBlaze
Published | Edited 27th Oct 2021
Author's Note
inspired by Stephen King's "Carrie"
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