Lives of Lust

Very original flow to this.  I've never seen the merging of fantasy and reality examined in such a way (if I am interpreting it correctly).

just a dark dream fashioned with a hint of irony from discordant day-mares smiles

Day-mares...I like that term.

So do day stallions

this is beautifully composed a merge of two worlds one of touch and one of sound combine within an fastasy of the mind and soul peeling back the flesh of inner lust...respect

It's nice when different world collides and something new comes from the debris

YES IT IS CAUSE FROM OUT OF THE ASHES THE FALCON SHALL FLY AS IT SOARS THROUGH THE SKIES OPEN THE WORLD TO NEW SIGHTS OF LIFE...RESPECT

Lovely imagery - you should use it in your poetry sir

SOUNDS GOOD BUT ITS JUST SOMETHING TO INSPIRE YOU IN YOUR WRITING FOR I KNOW YOU CAN WRITE SOMETHING TO THE  THOUGHT...ONE LOVE WITH RESPECT

Perhaps I can

I KNOW YOU CAN DEAR SOUL CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU COME UP WITH FROM YOUR MIND HEART AND SOUL...RESPECT WITH ONE LOVE

We'll see 🌱

let your imagination be free...

Slut furrow to cock ploughs...made me smile. There is something very English about that. Like a Jethro Tull lyric.

Beautifully written.  

I shall have to look up their lyrics

as always a pleasure to plough your furrow vicariously...:)

I avoid any trouble and fuss,  
Quite aware that I need not adjust  
My sweet little furrow,  
Because, if you burrow  
In there, it's just vicarious...

Shakespearian in tone and vocabulary.

Hamlet quivers in his grave and the rest is silence