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Teenage dreams
Flight of beauty transcends the heavens.
Powerful urges at you will is given.
By mere glance into you sensual eyes.
Lustful moans enrishing me in every sigh
Soft caramel skin raven hair.
Nothing to match you none compare.
You clasp my hand as i dig in deep.
You can rule my world and take my sleep
Angelic in every aspect truely amazing
Each powerful thrust the higher you sing
Body trimmers you grip til im numb
Dig in deep to your call as we both cum.
Powerful urges at you will is given.
By mere glance into you sensual eyes.
Lustful moans enrishing me in every sigh
Soft caramel skin raven hair.
Nothing to match you none compare.
You clasp my hand as i dig in deep.
You can rule my world and take my sleep
Angelic in every aspect truely amazing
Each powerful thrust the higher you sing
Body trimmers you grip til im numb
Dig in deep to your call as we both cum.
Published 17th Oct 2019
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17th Oct 2019 8:40pm
Many a Teenager has experienced just this,
what You've spilled
Favorite lines for me:
" You clasp my hand as i dig in deep.
You can rule my world and take my sleep "
what You've spilled
Favorite lines for me:
" You clasp my hand as i dig in deep.
You can rule my world and take my sleep "
17th Oct 2019 11:37pm
18th Oct 2019 6:48am
Your explanation of what influenced your write (Sade) helped make sense, noticing the description of her skin. Reading this brought back to me her song of 'Your love is king'.
Favourite lines (evoking I am sure the first time moments of many youngsters):
You clasp my hand as i dig in deep.
You can rule my world and take my sleep
Favourite lines (evoking I am sure the first time moments of many youngsters):
You clasp my hand as i dig in deep.
You can rule my world and take my sleep
18th Oct 2019 11:23am
18th Oct 2019 6:27pm
Dear J,
Wonderful trip down memory lane! I was hopelessly in love with David Cassidy (so help me god, if you say David Cassidy who? I will reach through this glass and throttle you 😏) very sweet write! Now I’m going to sing “I Think I Love You” for the rest of the day. Excellent pen!
H🌷
Wonderful trip down memory lane! I was hopelessly in love with David Cassidy (so help me god, if you say David Cassidy who? I will reach through this glass and throttle you 😏) very sweet write! Now I’m going to sing “I Think I Love You” for the rest of the day. Excellent pen!
H🌷
18th Oct 2019 8:06pm
