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The Big 'O' in the Sky
I wrote this just now
I don't expect comment
As you say no comment
Is an approval
I say no comment
Is a lack of interest
Or simply that it
Doesn't matter anyhow
Who really cares
We leave each other
Everyday
In some way
Deepening the wounds
That lie within
Hidden from all
Ever to see
Our gapping oozingness
We, the only ones
To feel any of this
Bending us in half
Into a fetal position
We cry
We scream
We kick
Flinging ourselves down
Pain so deep within
Never to escape
Death the only real release
And, thanks be to the powers
It is soon upon us
Giving us at long last
Release
I will scream
In ecstacy when i die
Death may be
The only time
To truly scream
In sheer delight
Of the power
Of the last
Big 'O' in the sky
Ever to be
Upon my death bed
Allow me my final pleasure.
I don't expect comment
As you say no comment
Is an approval
I say no comment
Is a lack of interest
Or simply that it
Doesn't matter anyhow
Who really cares
We leave each other
Everyday
In some way
Deepening the wounds
That lie within
Hidden from all
Ever to see
Our gapping oozingness
We, the only ones
To feel any of this
Bending us in half
Into a fetal position
We cry
We scream
We kick
Flinging ourselves down
Pain so deep within
Never to escape
Death the only real release
And, thanks be to the powers
It is soon upon us
Giving us at long last
Release
I will scream
In ecstacy when i die
Death may be
The only time
To truly scream
In sheer delight
Of the power
Of the last
Big 'O' in the sky
Ever to be
Upon my death bed
Allow me my final pleasure.
Published 15th Oct 2019
Author's Note
I am one of those unfortunates who have difficulty having orgasns. I wrote in response to a no comment, wire kind of love romance and life-long sexual journey.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Good thing You added notes in the author's section
as during the entire read i was trying to figure out what the < O > stood for.
& this line: " Our gapping oozingness " <<<<<------intrigued me - interesting word, gapping
as during the entire read i was trying to figure out what the < O > stood for.
& this line: " Our gapping oozingness " <<<<<------intrigued me - interesting word, gapping
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
17th Feb 2020 4:39pm
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17th Feb 2020 4:51pm
Yes of course, but when the big 'O' is as elusive as it is to me, it can become a battle at times.
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
17th Feb 2020 5:01pm
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26th Feb 2020 2:12pm
Yes. Very true, but when it is as elusive as it is with ne, then it becomes an issue...but maybe the right lover has yet to appear.
