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Fallen Angel
Spilling out the dungeon
Fallen angel
I might sacrifice my shadow under darkened suns
Hold up a minute I may never get that
Got heaven above, twist me down with sin in my blood
And I'm sending it back
A sentence above to fill in the gap
I'm sinning because I'm like that
Spilling out my feelings
I might feel them and I might fucking run
Hold it again, I feel it so cold
Gripping steel held straight to my dome
Devil in my prayers
Only one who fucking cares
Can't compare me dare to spare me either
Heavy air and liquid ether
I'm a fiend, I'm that creature
What I mean, I need to seek it
Secretly a feast depleted
with my demons
I'm a falling idol
Rip me up lost in the tidal force
Rip me from the vital source
Final course, I abort
Fallen angel
I might sacrifice my shadow under darkened suns
Hold up a minute I may never get that
Got heaven above, twist me down with sin in my blood
And I'm sending it back
A sentence above to fill in the gap
I'm sinning because I'm like that
Spilling out my feelings
I might feel them and I might fucking run
Hold it again, I feel it so cold
Gripping steel held straight to my dome
Devil in my prayers
Only one who fucking cares
Can't compare me dare to spare me either
Heavy air and liquid ether
I'm a fiend, I'm that creature
What I mean, I need to seek it
Secretly a feast depleted
with my demons
I'm a falling idol
Rip me up lost in the tidal force
Rip me from the vital source
Final course, I abort
Published 14th Oct 2019
| Edited 15th Oct 2019
Author's Note
I am feeling good, not suicidal, just getting some energy out on paper.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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19th Oct 2019 4:19am
Purge it.
It always feel better.
Like word vomit.
I think it's great mental exercise.
Losty
(:
It always feel better.
Like word vomit.
I think it's great mental exercise.
Losty
(:
This is absolutely incredible! So much so, I bookmarked it while browsing from the outside. I just remembered it & as I read over it once more, I'm glad I did. I've yet to stumble across your work...obviously, but Pandy's paying attention now. I believe this is something many of us can relate to; I sure can. I don't think you literally meant you willingly dance with the devil, but more so, expressing the side that can easily become fallen angel. That's at least what resonates with me & made me take notice. Great spill and im ooking forward to much more from you & oh so glad you're actually in a good place!
Anonymous
13th Nov 2019 1:41am
I love it. Strikes a familiar tone for me.
14th Nov 2019 11:28pm
Anonymous
25th Mar 2020 11:35am
I really like this one, I have written of a similar message sometimes.
25th Mar 2020 5:55pm
