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I am what I hate

 
my apologies to those who saw my bully this poem
a lady poetess was openly insulted in comment on one of her poems
I openly spoke out against her foul treatment
I was then insulted and challenged what was I going to do about it

so I wrote this person a poem
it was vicious
I know you were probably taken aback by my dark rage
I usually control it
but I was hurt on this ladies account
putting myself in her shoes

no it wasn't my place
I should have handled things better
and just reported the offending comment as abusive
my emotions sometimes get the better of me
my anger tightly controlled
slipped the chain
and I gave it to this guy full force

I didn't name him on the poem
so I fear I may have hurt--
the hearts and minds of those reading
not understanding its intended
really not even he deserved it

I'm deeply sorry
I hope you all can forgive me
it was evil

smackdownraven
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